Reincarnated as a goblin

by Nika13K

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Drama Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation Ruling Class Strategy Strong Lead Villainous Lead War and Military
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I used to be a big gang boss. We were called the black tiger gang. we had it all: money, fame and were living the good life. One day, an enemy gang attacked and raided us. They killed all of our friends. They stole all of our things. They raped our sisters and then killed them. 

Those bastards caught me and fed me to crocodiles. The last thing they said to me was "the strong devour the weak!". That phrase was embed into my soul. It makes me strive to become stronger. I vowed to come back to life, worm or God, and kill those bastards!

To my surprise, I woke up and found out I had become a goblin. A skinny one at that. I trained hard, used all of my skills and took on the world. My aim is to become a god and kill the bastards that did that to me. They better wish they die before they meet me.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 1 the death and birth of Dan ago
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 2 The greed of goblins ago
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 3 The rebellion ago
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 4 I'm free to become a thief ago
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 5 I'm raiding humanity ago
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 6 The grand heist ago
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 7 killing the slavers ago
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 8 One goblin vs three super bears ago
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 9 Establishing the community ago
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 10 the skill hunt! Part 1 ago
Volume 1 the beginning chapter 11 the skill hunt! Part 2 ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 1 Enemy goblins ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 2 the first dungeon and hobgoblin ago
volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 3 our resident scientist ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 4 charging the Orc troops ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 5 the orcs ago
Volume ? The hero chapter 1 the origin ago
Volume ? The hero chapter 2 the hero Of vengeance is born ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 6 raking in the S class ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 7 pet hunting ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 8 two new traits ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 9 the war has started ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 10 severe casualties ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 11 fighting the hobgoblins part 1 ago
Volume 2 the great goblin war chapter 12 fighting the hobgoblins part 2 ago
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Niurn
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I don't know where to begin, it's currently unreadable. Half of it is "I did X then Y" with no descriptions, barely a plot and a disregard for what a story is supposed to be.  

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Avadonia
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There isn't really a story, it's just a goblin killing and eating everything to get skill... constantly

THaD1US
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The story and the plot are good but the grammar could improve.

Specter2
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nothing new but is ok

as of posting i'm at V2 C10

seem to be your classic goblin power fantasy and needs editing,lots of grammer mistakes not that bad tho the point gets across.

Karolus
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Oof. This one is rough. The story runs at a breakneck speed, moving from one event to another with hardly a pause between. The grammer and spelling are rough, making the pacing even harder to follow. The story borrows tropes liberally and doesn't really innovate on them. Overall, this need a lot of work before it's ready for primetime.