Reincarnated as a goblin

Reincarnated as a goblin

by Nika13K

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I used to be a big gang boss. We were called the black tiger gang. we had it all: money, fame and were living the good life. One day, an enemy gang attacked and raided us. They killed all of our friends. They stole all of our things. They raped our sisters and then killed them. 

Those bastards caught me and fed me to crocodiles. The last thing they said to me was "the strong devour the weak!". That phrase was embed into my soul. It makes me strive to become stronger. I vowed to come back to life, worm or God, and kill those bastards!

To my surprise, I woke up and found out I had become a goblin. A skinny one at that. I trained hard, used all of my skills and took on the world. My aim is to become a god and kill the bastards that did that to me. They better wish they die before they meet me.

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Niurn
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I don't know where to begin, it's currently unreadable. Half of it is "I did X then Y" with no descriptions, barely a plot and a disregard for what a story is supposed to be.  

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Omnis Ra
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the story was ok. I liked the new take on the resurection genre where the main character gets turned into a goblin. the story is good but it does get tedious when you keep showing the skill tree and it feels like the story breaks the 4th wall a few times to many as well. Even with that i hope the story continues

Karolus
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Oof. This one is rough. The story runs at a breakneck speed, moving from one event to another with hardly a pause between. The grammer and spelling are rough, making the pacing even harder to follow. The story borrows tropes liberally and doesn't really innovate on them. Overall, this need a lot of work before it's ready for primetime.

Specter2
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nothing new but is ok

as of posting i'm at V2 C10

seem to be your classic goblin power fantasy and needs editing,lots of grammer mistakes not that bad tho the point gets across.

Avadonia
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There isn't really a story, it's just a goblin killing and eating everything to get skill... constantly

THaD1US
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The story and the plot are good but the grammar could improve.