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A dragoness with no interest in antagonising humans has her hoard stolen. That's obviously not an ideal situation for her. Together with her long time friend, she sets out to get her money back. Will they be able to succeed? I don't know yet, do I look like a reasonable author with an outline?

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...I never did think I'd review a story based on three chapters. Okay, two chapters and a prologue. But, hey, this is that good. I can't say much, since the story was eleven pages in my ebook reader as of me writing this. But, I'd go and recommend penniless to you all. It's original, well done so far and easy to read.

The author's style is pleasing to the eye and the mind, dialogue is good, and lots of characterization has been stealthily snuck in under our noses. The premise is solid, world building has been sneakdropped in without giving itself away too much.

In three chapters. No infodumping.

Honestly, if a story has made me enjoy it in so little time, it more than deserves a spot on my favourites list.