A Mouse in the Circuitry - A Kammi Kettu Story

by Katie-the-Angel-Witch

Someone has to make gadgets for all the would be heroes, and that someone might as well be Bridget, a relatively popular tech youtuber turned genius mouse girl during the Emergence. How did her early days go, and how different was it in Europe compared to the states? Well, read to find out.

Set in QuietValerie's amazing Kammi-verse setting

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Kara Null
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A fun and fresh take on the Kammiverse.

This story is a lot of fun. You never know what type of shinaniganry Bridget will get up to next. It's really a breath of fresh air to have such an upbeat character in the Kammiverse.

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That's a great moment and I can't wait to see where it goes from here!

superdbgtfan
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mouse girl making super stuff either just because or for heroes

Mithril Mercenary
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I love all the not-bigoted characters SO MUCH~! 💞

jadecriminal
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Decent story, some parts are a bit rushed.

Reviewed at: Road Trip!

Decent story, opens well. Outlines trans issues reasonably.

Protagonist is a youtuber and I find it hilarious.

A bit too fast on the adoption but kinda fluffy and all the characters have flair and amuse me gratly.

Protagonist centered morality though so YMMV. (Breaking and entering, assault, extorion, torture, intimidation, trespassing on government property, theft, kidnapping a minor. All justitfied in character.)

So all in all 95% decent read but switch from fluff and tech stuff to angry bone breaking on is a bit jarring.