The Wizard's Obsession

by SinSuzushi

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Drama Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Grimdark High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Supernatural War and Military
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

The Esterin Kingdom is invaded by the northern alliance after the fall of the silver legion.
From the ashes of destruction brought by the war, rises a wizard who will leave his mark on history.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
The Beginning ago
Resolve (1) ago
Resolve (2) ago
Master Rigrit (1) ago
Master Rigrit (2) ago
Initiation (1) ago
Initiation (2) ago
Initiation (3) ago
Initiation (4) ago
Ominous clouds (1) ago
Ominous clouds (2) ago
Ominous clouds (3) ago
Ominous clouds (4) ago
Escape (1) ago
Escape (2) ago
Escape (3) ago
Trenni village (1) ago
Trenni village (2) ago
Trenni village (3) ago
Trenni village (4) ago
Trenni village (5) ago
Scarlet bear (1) ago
Scarlet bear (2) ago
Scarlet bear (3) ago
Scarlet bear (4) ago
Scarlet bear (5) ago
Banquet (1) ago
Banquet (2) ago
Banquet (3) ago
Banquet (4) ago
Banquet (5) ago
Robin Hood (1) ago
Robin Hood (2) ago
Robin Hood (3) ago
Robin Hood (4) ago
Robin Hood (5) ago
Final Transaction (1) ago
Final Transaction (2) ago
Final Transaction (3) ago
Final Transaction (4) ago
Final Transaction (5) ago
The Witch's Grimoire (1) ago
The Witch's Grimoire (2) ago
The Witch's Grimoire (3) ago
The Witch's Grimoire (4) ago
The Witch's Grimoire (5) ago
The Witch's Grimoire (6) ago
The Witch's Grimoire (7) ago
The Witch's Grimoire (8) ago
The Witch's Grimoire (9) ago
Rich Rachel (1) ago
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Omi Nya
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I think I cried after the first chapter. Was not ready for the feels, really. While I feel that the writing is a little dry and too formal, the overall serious tone is a breath of fresh air compared to most wacky wish fulfillment stories here. I'd also prefer more internal dialogues of the MC to get more information on his feelings, but all in all, I recommend the story.

Raph772
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Too much telling, not enough showing, story feels like it's barebones, not enough meat on this story's bones