Litrpg: Killing to be Alive

by The Author

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Romance Short Story LitRPG Low Fantasy Multiple Lead Characters School Life Slice of Life
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore

No plot armors. No low stakes. No easy wins. No easy kills. No overpowered main characters. No peaceful lives, only last breaths.
This is the story of a group of ordinary students. Experience their highs, their lows, and their worst nightmares.
They stood out from the rest because it didn’t take them long to realize that their peaceful world had turned into what seemed like a never-ending warzone with deadly monsters lurking all over to kill every last one of them.
But they don’t want to step back because their lives matter a lot.
There is only one way this blood-spilling can stop... kill more monster until are powerful enough to hunt them.

Inspired from one of the actual DND game that THE AUTHOR and his friend played.

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Sundjin
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I assume the author is not a native speaker with a basic understanding of English and nothing more. The sentences that are grammatically correct are basic, though the author's vocabulary seems decent.

 

I read the first half of the first chapter before giving up. I cannot comment on the characters or story as the grammar prevents me from reading further. I checked chapter 20 and the grammar appears to be similar or the same as chapter one.

 

My suggestion to you, the author, is to use a program like Grammarly and study grammar for a while before editing the chapters. 

 

If you improve them and would like me to redo my review then please send me a message and I will have a look again.