Star Sea: The Journey Home

by stewart92

Original HIATUS Adventure Comedy Sci-fi Male Lead Slice of Life
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity

A lone floating ship with a cheery computer helper awakes a untest AI core after taken damage.

 

Milo isn't happy. Pam is too happy. The ship is burning.

 

Milo is ready to go home.

 

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Sky3Fall
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First to find your new story!

Here's a free 5 star! The power of laser mushrooms will conquer all!

 

Now it says I need 50 characters so Ima just type up random stuff and hope it meets the requirements. :D

darkenedjawbone
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interesting concept, i guess

Reviewed at: 1. Crash Course

there isn't much content here, but what can be read is of quality, and is pretty original.   i feel like the main character's pretty realistic so far, and that the challenges and struggles they'll experience as their quest progresses are balanced and also realistic.

only flaw i can think of that really matters is the haiatus we currently have, so you may not want to read it if you don't handle frozen plots too well.  or science fiction stories, i guess.