Ekalius Online

by Etzuerm

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi LitRPG Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Portal Fantasy / Isekai Strong Lead Virtual Reality

In the year 2230, a man found himself kicked out of the company he helped elevate to the top. Elecur, a multibillion-dollar company hired him to help them solidify their foundation in the upcoming VRMMORPG Garius Online.

 

The game would forever change the lives of everyone in the Alliance of Nations. Hiding a secret that even after 15 years had not been found. With the Saints Trials starting, Elecur could no longer afford the risk and kicked the man out of the company.

 

Not knowing why, he was fired, the man devoted himself to finding out the truth. Before he could even begin, he was murdered in cold blood.

 

On a planet far away four lifeforms came together to change the man’s future. With their motive unknown to everyone but themselves they turned back time.

 

Leo awoke 15 years in the past, confused and unable to understand what happened. Murdered in his past life, he decided that this one would be different. Thinking that reincarnating would help him become the number one expert in Garius Online, he suddenly found himself facing yet another roadblock.

 

The game he knew was no more, yet another one took its place. Similar, yet different, he must once again find his own way. With the game being his best hope at a better life and only hope of finding out why he died, he resolutely started his second chance at life.

 

With his past knowledge giving him a guiding hand, he would enter Ekalius Online and change his future. With the world remaining so similar, yet still so different, how will he complete his goal of uncovering the truth behind the Saints Trials?

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Snoek
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The reason for the low rating is the dialogue.

What bothered me most, is the mc's friend. Lines like: "Brother is so amazing!" really make it seem as if I'm reading some dogshit Chinese xanxia.

 Who actually speaks like this? 

tyes77
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Disappointing. The novel seems to give the mc everything from a top tier one of a kind special class to unique drops that fit his present situation. Developers seem to be okay with the dude breaking records left and right alongside the server pretty much announcing "broken character alert!".

 

I wouldn't mind so much if the mc worked for it or did anything new yet despite being from the "future", he doesn't do anything that anyone else in his position not from the future would do. Dude is straight up cookie cutter with nothing special about him at all.

 

I wouldn't recommend this novel to anyone actually looking for a decent novel that doesn't seem like it's written like an automated type writer with it checking in boxes of common cliches of any other gaming novel.

Snek
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Heavily influenced

I read some of you complaining about the interaction between characters and how it feels like a xianxia novel.
Well you are right.
The author has clearly been HEAVILY influenced by the webnovel Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God and i mean Heavily.

I won't be reading this unless the author starts to make alot of changes.

Kap
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Noting New but still enjoyable

Clearly draws inspiration from other web novels and admittedly doesn't do anything really new. But it's not unreadable, it isn't plagiarizing, and you can see a sincere effort and passion put into the  work. Honestly it's about as good as a LOT of published works that are coming out. An enjoyable read for an afternoon.

Cody Obannon
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I enjoyed it so far.  It keeps my attention quite well, even with knowing that I'll blow through the amount of chapters posted in less than 2 hours.  I tend to read much slower when I know this, but I still flew through this one, shows just how well done it is so far.

dante7555
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The quality of writting is really good, let’s start with that. But the main character is simple af. He’s smart sure but he’s not defined by his intelligence, he’s a good person sure but that’s just cause he don’t care, he wants to make money sure but he’s not even the slightest bit greedy. 

This is the first time I’ve read a character that’s solid but uninteresting af. He’s not unique and neither are his actions/goal. Personally I just prefer a main character that has a single trait/goal so overwhelming that he is defined by it. Makes it simpler to understand and sympathize with. This main character just feels like his traits were double dipped, well maybe tripple or even quatruppled dipped.

I also really dislike stories where potential companions constantly pops up and wants to follow the MC and oh what a coincidence they have a trait that would work perfectly with the MC, who would’ve guessed.

Chaoskultist
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A very promising work of Fiction

Dear Etzuerm,

I thank you for this promising piece of literature. Your story has promise and I will follow it with rapt attention. laughing
The only things amiss about this story are that a reader in a really rare case could stumble upon some grammatical errors. But those are rare und not really worth anything in the long run.

I wish you good luck and no writer's blog because your story will go far.

Falconking
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 The story line is kind of new to me , but is very interesting. Waiting to see how the story goes from here.