Terror Infinity - Side B

by Wellsford

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Plot - Want to know the meaning of life? Want to live... A real life? The world changes when you click YES. In God's Dimension, you have to keep getting stronger, keep evolving to survive one horror movie after another. Do you kill everyone in your way to reach the end as a lone king? Or fight along with your comrades and survive through the support of friends? Everything was just for staying alive. Until you find the secret of God's Dimension. Who is the real enemy?

Terror Infinity - Side B

In a new experiment to push mankind to evolve, God has decided to send people into the worlds of Manga, Anime, Light Novels, Visual Novels and Video Games. Compared to horror movies, such worlds shouldn't be as terrifying and should be easily to return from, but... You would be very, very mistaken. Welcome to Side B of God's World. 

Current Status: On Hiatus/Abandoned. Third 

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Warning: Major spoiler for the Manga, Anime, Light Novels, and Games that are used for this FF. Also, no permission is given for anyone to continue Side B because its on Hiatus.

 

 

 

Proofreaders:

 

Hoebagger (Retired), 

Azarza (Retired), D

eltoren (Retired).

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 1, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B, Exchange System ago
Terror Infinity Side B, Character Update 1 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2 - 1, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2 - 2, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3 - 1, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3 - 2, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3 - 3, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4 - 1, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4 - 2, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 5 - 1, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 5 - 2, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6 - 1, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6 - 2, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7 - 1, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7 - 2, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7 - 3, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 8 - 1, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 8 - 2, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 9 - 1, H.O.T.D ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 9 - 2, H.O.T.D FINAL ago
Terror Infinity Side B, Character Update 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 10 - 1, H.O.T.D Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 10 - 2, H.O.T.D Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11 - 1, H.O.T.D Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11 - 2, H.O.T.D Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11 - 3, H.O.T.D Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 12, H.O.T.D Next ago
Characters Update 3 ago
Mission Ideas ago
Ki Exchange Skill Comments ago
God's Exchange List 1 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 1 - 1, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 1 - 2, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2 - 1, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2 - 2, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3 - 1, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3 - 2, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4 - 1, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4 - 2, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4 - 3, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4 - 4, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 5, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6 - 1, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6 - 2, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6 - 3, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6 - 4, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7 - 1, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7 - 2, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 8, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 9 - 1, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 9 - 2, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 10, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11 - 1, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11 - 2, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11 - 3, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 12, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 13, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 14, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 15, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 16, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 17, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 18, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 19, BTOOOM! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 20, BTOOOM! FINAL ago
Mission 2, Team Score Sheet ago
Characters Update 4 ago
BIM Series Exchange ago
The Genetic Constraint Report 1 ago
Terror Infinity Character Suggestions ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 21, BTOOOM! Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 22 - 1, BTOOOM! Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 22 - 2, BTOOOM! Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 23 - 1, BTOOOM! Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 23 - 2, BTOOOM! Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 23 - 3, BTOOOM! Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 24, BTOOOM! Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 25, BTOOOM! Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 26, BTOOOM! Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 27, BTOOOM! NEXT ago
Characters Update 5 ago
God's Exchange List 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 1, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2 - 1, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2 - 2, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2 - 3, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3 - 1, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3 - 2, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 5 - 1, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 5 - 2, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 5 - 3, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7 - 1, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7 - 2, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 8, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 9, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 10, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 12, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 13, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 14, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 15, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 16, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 17, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 18, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 19, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 20, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 21, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 22, Real World I ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 23, Real World I Final First Half ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 24, Real World I Final Second Half ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 25, Real World I NEXT ago
Sci-fi Exchange Ideas ago
An apology to my many fans. ago
Notice of Return, a rant, and a shameless offer to the fans. ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 1, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 5, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 8, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 9, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 10, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 12, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 13, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 14, Apocalypse Alice ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 15, Apocalypse Alice Final ago
Mission 3 Team Score Sheet ago
Character Update 6 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 16, AA Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 17, AA Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 18, AA Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 19, AA Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 20, AA Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 21, AA Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 22, AA Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 23, AA Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 24, AA Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 25, AA Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 26, Apocalypse Alice NEXT ago
Character Update 7 ago
God's Exchange List 3 ago
Sorry this is not a chapter. Just found out something interesting. ago
Quest Terminology ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 1, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 5, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 8, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 9, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 10, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 12, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 13, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 14, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 15, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 16, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 17, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 18, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 19, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 20, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 21, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 22, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 23, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 24, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 25, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 26, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 27, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 28, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 29, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 30, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 31, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 32, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 33, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 34, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 35, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 36, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 37, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 38, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 39, HxH Greed Island ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 40, HxH Greed Island FINAL ago
Mission 4 Team Score Sheet ago
Character Update 8 ago
Terror Infinity Question? ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 41, HxH G.I Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 42, HxH G.I Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 43, HxH G.I Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 44, HxH G.I Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 45, HxH G.I Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 46, HxH G.I Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 47, HxH G.I Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 48, HxH G.I Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 49, HxH Greed Island NEXT ago
Character Update 9 ago
God's Exchange List 4 ago
Terror Infinity FF Idea ago
Enemy Team Ideas ago
The Genetic Constraint Report 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 1, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 5, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 8, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 9, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 10, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 12, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 13, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 14, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 15, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 16, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 17, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 18, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 19, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 20, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 21, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 22, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 23, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 24, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 25, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 26, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 27, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 28, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 29, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 30, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 31, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 32, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 33, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 34, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 35, DRAE: UDG ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 36, DRAE: UDG FINAL ago
Mission 5 Team Score Sheet ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 37, DRAE: UDG Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 38, DRAE: UDG Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 39, DRAE: UDG Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 40, Dangan Ronpa NEXT ago
Character Update 10 ago
God's Exchange List 5 ago
Plot Holes of the Original Terror Infinity ago
Martial art techniques revolving around kicks. ago
How I would change the original up. ago
Notice of Return! ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 1, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 2, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 3, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 4, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 5, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 6, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 7, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 8, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 9, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 10, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 11, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 12, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 13, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 14, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 15, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 16, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 17, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 18, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 19, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 20, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 21, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 22, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 23, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 24, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 25, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 26, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 27, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 28, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 29, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 30, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 31, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 32, H.O.T.D 2 ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 33, H.O.T.D 2 FINAL ago
Mission 6, Team Score Sheet ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 34, H.O.T.D 2 Intermission ago
Terror Infinity Side B - Chapter 35, H.O.T.D 2 NEXT ago
Character Update 11 ago
Enemy/Ally Team Info ago

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Nimasaur
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A decent Fanfiction of Terror Infinity

I really like that the author has kept up with the chapters in comparison to other authors on this site. The main divergence in this fanfiction is that instead of horror movies, the author throws them into anime, novels, video games, etc.

Another main divergence is that in the real world, people that have left gods dimension have made up their own factions which also makes it a bit interesting.

So the story is alright and the style of writing too, nothing really to pick on.
Grammar: Also decent, there are some errors in each chapter and can throw you off slightly sometimes. A proofreader would easily solve that though.

Character: This would be where the story struggles the most in my opinion and get's worse through the story. It got that japanese novel arrogant mc/harem syndrome vibe, but you can work around that. It's just that the characters come across as shallow and one dimensional, there's no real depth to any of them perhaps except for 1 or 2 if you stretch it. I would barely even miss any character if they died, and it might even bring some development for the other characters. 

And the budding harem, the problem is that it detracts attention from the story & character development with each new member. It seems to go downhill with each new "sister-wife" as the author writes it. They come across as trophies or dolls in my eyes.  Also the story seems more focused on the harem than the other characters which hurts the other characters.

One big thing for me is the stupid mistakes the characters make and keeps repeating even when you're responsible for others lives. In these moments I would still be okay with it it if a character goes completely dumb as long as they get to pay for their mistakes and learn from it. But no, all of the cast feel like they've got plot armour and basically nothing ever hurts them.

It also feels so incredibly artificial because it looks like the author want it to go a certain direction but can only resolve to this and takes it out on the characters. Plans and strategies can go wrong when you can't account for everything, use that(it's something the original did really well). However, don't regress the characters intelligence/development just because everything has to fit. I mean with the intelligence stat growing you would think there would be some development there.

Also the constant harassment of "otaku, disgusting, weebo, no life,etc" is getting veeery dull at this stage, even more now that other characters join in on it. 

One last thing that detracts from the story is that it tries to be a bit of everything, horror, tragedy, comedy, romance, action/adventure, etc. It's spread out a bit thin and it feels like the author can't decide which way to go with the story(although it seems to go for more comedy/romance & action currently).

In the end, I still  enjoy reading it even if I've got my issues with the character section. If you can skip that or even like that, then you'll enjoy it even more than me. I still will keep up with it the story and see where it develops.

MysteriousGuyWithAMoustache
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My Opinion. A bit longer than planned...

The start is annoyingly similar to the original but if you have not read the original Terror Infinity it is perfect for you. Luckily I read this first and it convinced me to read the original leading to this comment.

 

Ignoring my previous statement, if you have not read it, it is an enjoyable start with interesting characters with interesting stories which seek to give you an attachment to them. They develop their own lives, some better than others, which shows their own problems and causes for depression leading to the 'event' while giving them reasons to be attached to their previous world even if stated indirectly, unlike the original novel which seems quite lazily thrown together.

 

Finishing off my review. I enjoy this far more than the original as it has a greater depth in character despite being a harem, which I don't completely hate but I have to admit is done quite well compared to others as they're thrown together. yet I feel certain things are a bit stretched such as Aqua being a 'clutz' but doesn't seem to follow this. 

As I'm getting off track, the novel is good and addicting but I recommend you read this or the original but this has more indepth characters, likely more permanent deaths and finally... Somewhat developing relationships which are probably some sort of syndrome for someone who start to heavily relies on someone for something, forgive the example but similar to an 'abusive' father/step-father. (Avoiding too much detail for younger readers.)

 

While the original has quite a lazy author who can make a good plot. I'm only suggesting this as the exchange system is quite shallow, avoiding too much detail, and the villains have shallow personalities that all based on self-survival which, unless they're over-powered, would lead to death and/or horrible pain! But It is still an enjoyable story which I enjoyed.

Azarza
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Among the fan fictions i love reading that still continue updating regularly, this has been the one I liked best due to the ever evolving storylines and the ever looming threat that each ark brings in the progression. The goals that each character strive for and the ever present threat of death driving everyone to grow stronger each mission really makes this worth reading.  

As an editor, I really like editing this novel and if possible I will make sure I bring out the best quality I can for all to enjoy. 

Greywolf
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I like the story so far, and I would love to continue reading it, but Shin is getting too annoying  Sure he is geting stronger, and he is taking the life and death situations seriously, both his own, and more importantly, his comrades. He is mature enough to trust them to their own battles, but still worries. But I don`t see him maturing much. The part where he told the kids that he can`t judge their choice about wanting revenge for their parents (considering the situation they and he are in, and not about in real life), is a great example of maturity, but every time I next read his ``ultimate protagonist``  ``harem`tangents amd whatnot, I go do something else for a cpl hours before coming back to reading. He should have matured out of that three arcs ago. Or at the very least, gradually gotten less an idiot until the last arc. Now, if he doesn`t stop being an idiot, I don`t know if I will stay with it or not. another arc or two will tell

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A fanfiction, in the end.

Welllllllll...

I wanted to review this for a longtime and actually just kept procrastinating so now I forgot about the details, but here's what I was tempted to say :

Nimasaur's review pretty much summed up my view of this novel as a story, so I'll comment about the fanfiction's side.

(ATM I read up till start of HxH intermission arc, so there might be some spoilers for those that didn't read up to there yet)

Well, that's a decent read for sure, a good fanfiction when you see what people can do. I'd say it keeps people entertained, as an action-packed novel.

Saddeningly, it loses the original's "horror" side in the process, which is kinda amusing since the name is Terror Infinity.

Although it may be caused by the author's reliance on the original, the first mission in HOTD was probably the only one which had this bit of horror left in it, maybe along with the second one in BTOOOM!.

But maybe that was also because the reader didn't know yet about every single main character's plot armor.

I mean seriously dude, Misaki was Death-Flagged since min 1 (Not talking about the overkilling amount you added throughout the story; poor Misaki), and in the end, when you made him survive, what, 5 missions with the team ? His death's only purpose is to enrage Shin, whom he doesn't even know that much...

I mean, this best friend's death thing and all is great, but I simply can't feel anything seeing only Misaki's stupid dumbass hothead side...

Not like he and Shin were BFF anyway...

Yeah, and wtf is up with your power balance ? Not bothering speaking about... what's her name again? Kirasa ? Let's call her sword-waifu (I mean, this pretty much sums up her existence).

Well, sword-waifu's fight with Deadpool's guy ( there were so many reasons why he should have been stronger, even if his magic didn't - lol - do that much damage to sword-waifu), even the 20-men mission in Alice was fucked up - NOBODY DIED.

Yeah, right, 1 more sec and that was a wipe, alright, that's nice and all, but, dude, you do realize God couldn't predict (forgot his name yet again ^^) infiltrated bad guy's betrayal ? And it made them lose, like, 4 hours (forgot as well, but I'm pretty sure it was hours anyway) waiting for Shin to wake up ? So tell me - where is it ? The 20-men sure wipe everyone fears so much ? Just find NPCs and ez game ez life ? And I'm not taking account of the fact theis should have been a sure wipe for 20 men of Aqua's level... (I mean, in the original, it is ascertained that the difficulty of god's missions were standardized to the strongest team member's level enhancementwise and... enhancements are almost the only things Aqua has.)

Uh... I kinda lost where I was going now...

Well guess I should say that now then : I'm only talking about the bad things right now and not the good ones since that's pretty much what you can expect of life - picking up your mistakes and ignoring your good deeds.

And I do (most of the time anyway - I mean, there are moments you really trigger me) enjoy this read.

As an action-filled light-hearted terror infinity anyway. And maybe this styke suits better animes, so it may be fine.

Oh and I hate theatre-style in novels. Well that's my tastes though so I won't take it into account for my score.

Right, before I finish this, just gotta say that I feel like you're messing up with Shin's power levels. Some times he's stronger than he should be and, well, gotta say plot armor anime and all so it isn't that bad, but mostly, he's weaker (or at least I feel so), I mean, he's the soon-to-be over powered main character that gets high scores in every mission, and still struggles against small fries were Connor easily takes care of enemies' second strongest member after a single mission ? (Speaking about HxH here) I get he's a child soldier who unlocked constraint and had bloodlines or whatever but still, that's a bit forced.

I'll just stop here since I'd most likely continue for an unhealthy amount of time if I was to list every single little thing.

And I guess I forgot big ones, but well.

All in all, as a fanfiction, it greatly differs from the original not in the idea, but in the style, which I guess is why I saw some people loving your story but disliking the original.

I'll rapidly say what I liked though, since I guess it'll mltivqte you or something :

-Good going on the four pillars, spices things up, increase story's potential and all, don't forget to bring some twists in to show they aren't completely dumb.

-Style, but I already explained.

-Fights, nicely done. Though MC does lots of mistakes which should be understandable and welcome since he's human, but a bit unsettling when he's under genetic constraint, which unlocks battle instincts.

-Derrick - was it ? Oh no, this one was infiltrated bad guy, remembered him at last, just too lazy to edit. No, I meant the NPCs getting the watch and allowing players to buy in mission, didn't specially like that part but it's always good to see new things, you know. Missions tends to be boring when you can guess everything that'll happen - one of the problems of overly present plot armor.

You'll greatly surprise me if you ever kill one of Shin's waifu. Even so I'd probably think you were gonna resurect her but still. I can't shake off the feeling that being MC's girl gives you plot armor. Get him to fall in love with ennemy team's girl or something, it'll spice up the boring romance/harem seriously, and God knows it needs it.

Yeah, as I said I always lose myself and will never finish.

So stop.

See you.

kette442
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Really interesting story

In my opinion this fan fiction is really great. You try to go into detail with every step. Sometimes a bit flat and maybe not 100% keeping the line all the time but that is to be expected of fan fictions and it definitely is better than many others i read.

 

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I really love how you work on the arcs. I mean who would think about a story in HotD where the main charackters friend is still alive and one of his main traits never develop and Team Japan has to deal with it? Really nice idea on how you expanded the story and thought kinda behind the scenes to make it more authentic. 

 

The increased danger level for was kinda hard in that one but the whole story changed so it was ok with the things explained meanwhile.

 

Arc 2 was really great too, i havent heared of BTOOOM! before and still have to do that but even without knowing the story there was nothing i didn't understand. Really like how you managed to make a story about their survival although a lacking part of that arc is that there was no real danger in case of the NPC BTOOOM! players. Everything else was nice.

 

Really like the real world part too although Shin kinda behaves weird in sometimes but it's just one of the crazy main characters we all learn to love so maybe sometimes make his behaviour a bit smoother may be cool but not necesarry. Im really happy that this is not one of those stories where the characters just go do things without thinking about it and that they really have to train to get their skills up. Though I'm really sad that Saki died but it really fit into the story, but we can be sad right? xD

 

The system with weapons/modifications etc. is great too although being able to mass produce better items with so little points seems kinda too much. If it is not as expensive as the complete one i think it is really ok but here i think you overdid it a bit with all those things that saki was able to do. Just feels too much for me.

I am really looking forward to the effects of multiple modifications/mutations of ones body. If i rememver right you had the concept of those allowing each other or canceliing on another out or even bringing bad effects to the body (extreme case death). Maybe I understood it wrong but it didnt seem to be able to have some of all of these effects. For example if one had mana and the ghoul modifications. Something like being able to fuse the blood skills with something like a fireball if one uses the mana within that blood skill (mana in blood if the concept is that mana is everywhere) but at the same time cant use their own mana to channel spells otherwise because it is bound in the blood and the ghould mutation is stronger than the mana one.

 

Just some random thought of me though. If something of my review seems weird I never really read Terror Infinity but plan to do so in the future and furthermore anything that has to do with mana is already a thing i analize in ever fanfic etc. i read because i really like thinking about the concept of mana in another world and make a really logical one :P I guess my mana rantrings are unlogical though,,,

 

Anyways hope this will go really really far and you keep on doing a great job as always :P

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 I like your story, I won't say much because iI'm just a newbie reader.

Just one suggestion 

Deltoren
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Good and getting better

Okay as the editor i might be a little bit biased but i felt the need to give this a review.

Style: Amusing and fluid. i have no problem reading this stuff over and over again.

story: ok this one is a bit harder but it is good and interesting and well done making such a world with a base in anothers work but making  it your own so well. but since it is not entirely original - one star

grammar: only thing i can say is good getting better

Characters: best part of the story. interesting and amusing love the character interactions. the heroines might throw themselves into the mc's lap but it is kind of subtle in the way it happens or at least takes a while to take effect

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 I was thinking after this you could give him a second energy chakra so he can do shadow clone jutsu and Spam learn abilities for cheap and if you don't understand Naruto learns rasen shuriken by making thousands of clones then doing it over and over but you could also have home copy the moves with ki

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Made an account just to rate and favourite. Been following since the 2nd arc. I've loved the original TI a lot and yours is also just amazing. Please give us 2 releases a day :x <3