I'm just an 'Ordinary' Human (MCU fanfic)

by PG87 Mertens

Fan Fiction HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead High Fantasy Low Fantasy Magic Male Lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Strong Lead Super Heroes Supernatural Urban Fantasy
Warning This fiction contains:
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A guy gets hit by a truck and sent to a fantasy world with less power than your average peasant. (Un)fortunately, he discovered his secret power of Immortality at the hands of the current destroy-the-world inclined Demon Lord and becomes experimental subject #1. 

After hundreds of years, the Demon Lord is killed and the job of destruction was handed to him. Being not terribly favorably inclined to this fantasy world, he wreaks havoc on the world... 

Killing sacred beasts, massacring cities with an army of undead, headhunting servants of God, plaguing a whole continent with a deadly virus.

But he was still unsatisfied.

During an experiment, he accidentally killed himself trying to open a gateway to a new world. And wakes up from his coma in his original world. Except, it isn't his world, exactly. Now there is a man in a metal suit, a 90-years old buff dude with a shield, a muscle head demi-god and other weirdos who formed a team called the ‘Avengers’. 

None of that matters though, because he is so over all that drama. This life is going to be carefree. Or at least, that's the plan. 

Note: The 4th wall is thin on this one, so the MC often breaks it. As this is fanfiction, I will make sure to follow the "Fair use" clause of the Copyright law. Please support this on its original website too, Webnovel.

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Haunt999
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Interesting concept, Ruined by characters

So yeah where do I even begin?

ok so the mc was touted to be the unforgiving next-to-omnipotent demon lord who could have become a god anytime he wanted

he was told to be ruthless and completely destroyed all the hope of humanity from the world he was in 

He returns to his world and realizes that it’s now the mcu(okay that’s fine)

He decides to not bother about saving the world or being a hero and just wants to live his life as is

Then the fucking female lead appears - a dumb, psychotic, useless, ditzy woman who acts like a bloody 5 year old 

And if that wasn’t bad enough she takes the mc on wild “adventures” with realliy flimsy excuses like ill buy you a game or something and I told your mom I’m your wife and if you don’t come your mom will be sad 

Basically absolute bullshit

So from all this we come to know that the mc has basically no balls whatsoever and is willing bend over till his forehead touches his ass to accommodate the female lead

AND if that wasn’t bad enough...in chapter 14....it’s revealed why he bends  over so much to satisfy the desires of someone with a single digit Iq 

Oh my god that flimsy excuse made me rage so hard I had to stop reading then and there cuz if didnt stop I felt like my brain would liquidize and flow out of my nostrils 

 

 

So basically TLDR : an interesting concept ruined by horrible execution and bad characters 

DiagonD
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My spidey sense is going off...

Leaving three stars for now since it’s just the prologue and we still haven’t gotten to the fleshy part yet. I’m interested, however, although the premise is cliche, the grammar is top notch, and the style is reader friendly, kind of like how Spider-Man would break the fourth wall. I’m looking forwards to seeing just how over powered the MC is supposed to be if he had “great magical abilities”  in a fantasy world that shared the same system of magic as Marvels, as you declared. If he retained all of his abilities from the fantasy world he might be discoverable by Dr.Strange though or the soreceress supreme depending on where he landed in the mcu timeline. Anyway, hope there’s more soon! And thank you for your work!!

jimmymcbimmy
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this story is pretty cringe, there isn't a better way to explain it. 2000 year old demon lord and he protects some random woman cuz plot demanded it. breaks SoD too much.

litteraly just canon mcu. the dialogue can be pretty much summed up into: witty one liners and funny cause random. the mc realises he has a weak body and does nothing to correct it. another thing is i can't tell if the author is making a meme or if he is serious cause the tone of the narration and dialogue is so bland.

"Well, I could've achieved Godhood if I tried a bit harder" 2000 year old demon lord who was helpless and experimented on for hundreds of years doesn't want more power??? cool meme bro.  

another thing, the mc is a demon lord who has killed mounntains of humans however just because of some random woman he turns into a dog that will do anything for her???

just dont read this, its really bad

Josh_Williams
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Grammer is pretty much top notch, Character development is going alright but the mc isn't really the ruthless "demon lord" that apparently decimated the human race for 2000 years that you describe him as. He's a softie, and so far until the current chapter all he's done was watch various mcu scenes from afar. Not really an entertaining volume tbh. But the direction it's going now seems fun, keep it up

Abhyudaya agrawal
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When i first started this I felt like mc is doing stuff without making any sense like protecting a strange journalist he met recently. But as you go on things are revealed and story starts to make sense. Though author is not doing anythin unique except for the atlantis part.

VoidEater
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I have nothing to say for the grammar because it's good. Story is meh could have been great if it wasn't for the inconsistent character and the annoyyyying female lead(?). Fan fiction is the easiest to write. You already have world/setting for your story and the mcu has the best world building. I'm just so frustrated because this could be a really great read it's just that the mc is insufferable. 

Salfredolph The Merchant
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If you're a hardcore M this story is for u, it's brain & eye bleach and if you want to read it all I can say is get ready to cringe and I warned you.

karm4
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STAY away from this

Pure wishfullfillment story with no real plot except our "lovely" MC being funny by insisting hes just a normal person while killing monsters left and right.

Was funny the first time but thats basically the only plot this story has.

Sky3Fall
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Best fan-fic ive ever read

What the title says. Although the interactions with the MCU characters and stuff aren't that great, but the rest (original content) is pretty good. Keep it up!

Cestarian
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An iron man movie recap

I read 13 chapters before giving up.

 

Here's what I got.

The story is about a guy who reincarnated, went through the fantasy crap as a demon lord, came back to his original body but in the mcu instead of earth (yet despite being from earth and a mom's basement dweller he doesn't even know what that is apparently...)

 

The rest of the story up till this point has been him sitting on the sidelines of the Iron Man 2 movie, taking pictures and making commentary.

That's it. That's everything the story seems to be doing, an iron man 2 recap...

Not really worth a read, the premise wasn't that bad but the author is literally doing nothing with it.