The Space Detriment

by BulletproofRecit

When a driven treasure seeker and a wilful bounty hunter find themselves on the wrong end of a deal that involves a space mafia and a superpowered crystal in which they are strong-armed to retrieve from one of the most powerful figures in the galaxy. The fate of the galaxy rests on their uncooperative hands, and if they can work out their differences in time, they might just have a chance in stopping a galaxy turmoil, and possibly, war.

The story, titled The Space Detriment, flips through the perspectives of our two main characters, Aread Sears, a defiant treasure seeker looking to quit and return back home, and Klara Onder, a bounty hunter with a personal vendetta that she has been chasing for years. Our two main characters find themselves having to work together, applying what they’ve learnt in order to overcome conflict, space battles, some bad writing, a terrible robot companion, and most importantly, their past.

NEW CHAPTERS EVERY WEEK! SEE YOU THEN, GALAXY-RIDDEN READER! 

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