Sortis Online (The Demonborn)

by greentleevis

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead GameLit Grimdark Magic Male Lead
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A darkish VRMMO litRPG with heavy settlement-building mechanics inspired by Dwarf Fortress and the like. 

A young couple, Rowan Black and Gabrielle Allaire, waits eagerly to play a newly-released multiplayer video game.

Developed with revolutionary, second-gen, ultra-realistic virtual reality tech, Sortis Online offers an open-world experience with a twist: players are given unique starting conditions (fates) based off their personalities and desires.

Through a lottery system, a lucky few are offered legendary fates. Rowan is one of those lucky few, a demonborn. Together they embark on a journey of wilderness survival and villainry.

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Grayshade
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Looking good so far. There's something bothering me about Row and Gabs behavior, but I just can't put my finger on.

Bandicoot
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Interesting so far, no obvious errors, and the setting is familiar but unique enough to hold interest.

 

The MC's are a bit touched in the head; they flip back and forth from manipulative of everyone and each other to 20yo dumb asses.  It can be jarring