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Callum is alone in the States applying for a job as an engineer when the world changes forever. In an event called the Emergence he is changed into a creature of legend known throughout many ancient cultures, the trickster fox. Follow Kalia as she descends into villainhood, becoming the greatest thief in Penrith city, outwitting heroes and villains alike!

This story has both Cuteness and Heartache, so if that's not your thing, I'm sorry :). Also contains the temporary death of a side character, which is apparently something I need to warn people about.

 

(Originally wrote this story on a different site, but I'm trying out royal road.)

 

Also, I should tell you that this is only one story of an expanded universe that my friends and I are writing in. There is two other stories currently being written, including one that will play an important role later on. We'll see if they upload here too.

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FlitterPuff
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Yet Another Biased Review

Another one, you say? 

There's a reason why this story has so many biased reviews. Before I decided I wanted to hop on the Kammi Kettu writing train (sorry, my story chapters aren't up on RR just yet), I was just another reader. Val has created a wonderful little universe here full of complex characters and a bit of a mystery in the background. It's not a story that's going to be liked by everyone; no story with trans characters and an acknowledgment of racism in America will be. It is, however, a story that I've thoroughly enjoyed so far and can't wait to see what happens going forward!

Nicholas Dietz
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I am currently up to date (chapter 16), and this story has jumped into my list of favorites.

Good grammer, good writing style.

Story wise, it's fantastic. A delicious blend of superheroes and myth, all causing chaos.

WARNING! Character analysis has small spoilers.

Spoiler: Spoiler

 A great story with action, psychological trauma, fluffy romance (in more ways than one), and some wonderful yuri.

BE WARNED! If you cant handle girl love, or binary gender neutral characters, or racists, this probably isn't for you. But give it a try, you'll love it!

potatogoddess
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Read up to the latest chapter (chapter 4), story is a good read so far. Grammar is on point and there's pretty much only one character to judge right now which is the MC. He/she is pretty good and believable. Him dealing with the new changes is interesting, mostly with how his transformation seemed to have some changes to his emotions, which IMO seems and is done pretty believable. Can't judge style for shit but the storyvis presented pretty good so far and the action scenes are easy to follow. Only gripe I got is pretty small but its how the MC says he doesn't really care about politics but then proceeds to describe a group of people as looking like 'racist white trash'. It just felt a bit out of character for the MC to me. Again, just a minor gripe, maybe i'm just over/underthinking things. Overall pretty good story so far, which I feel I shouldn't be saying given that I'm only 4 chapters in. Looking forward to what comes next.

rakmburglar
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Love the story so far. keep up the good work and the adorableness makes me want to vomit rainbows.

DerbyGhost
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A Thoroughly unbiased biased review

 This story is just lovely. Valerie has such a playful way with words and the audience is taken along for a ride. Kalia as a protagonist is puckish and immediately lovable. There are highs, lows, comedy, tragedy, and a whole lot of gay. Aka everything that a good discerning audience should look for in a story. 

 

I know some people complain about the tie in stories. But we are folx who have asked if it's okay to write in the universe. There is no requirement to read the other stories. It can flesh out some characters, but not mandatory. It's fun to have a shared creative space with friends. But you don't have to read if you don't want to. 

 

Also. This is the trans wish fulfillment that trans folx need right now. In a world where doctors have now been okayed to refuse treating trans folx, some of the outright rudeness that Emerged people face (hint it's a metaphor) doesn't seem too out of place. But throughout it all adorableness and love shine on through. 

Kara Null
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I've been hooked since the first few chapters! I honestly can't get enough of Kalia! She's soooo cute! I'm always looking forward to the next chapter.

Honestly I've read a ton of fantasy and sci-fi over the years and have been enjoying this series just as much as many of my favorites!

The only downside is I can't binge read it for days on end yet!

digi97
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I like the story so far , the story flow nicely and it is fun ti read. 

The slice of life elements are great for the non-human theme, the romance fit nicely and the gender bender gives an extra spyce.

My only complain would be that so far, the "bad guys" are a bit too much stereotypical and are shallow, same goes for the overused evil nazi.

Sab
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You are doing vary well at this. Keep up the good work dont let others get to you about there Review. Keep doing the storys. I hope to see a happy ending to this and your next book to come out soon after this one. Please :D I want to see the two love birds to be happy and maybe the little fox become a good girl.

superdbgtfan
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Looking forward to more

she makes happy fox noises when pet or when cuddling her tail. enough said

Radek
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Through it is still early to to put a review (chapter 13 - Minx), but if it is going the current way, then there is no fear for it to drop  :).

The main character state of the mind is set up the way that we readers know how it works and why in certain situations "they" apply special methods to deal with their enemies. 

We also know that MC is a person that won't be turning into genocide maniac in near future as they suffer and want to deal revenge without hurting (too much) innocent people. 

I don't want to spoiler a story so I'm writing in roundabout way, but I think for sure. The story is written much better than my review, it is easy to read and non confusing as my review might be. 

The story is going in a completly new universe where is another story from another author. Just type Kammi Kettu in search bar and you will find it.

 

 

Thanks for reading this review. I hope that you didn't get a headache because of my writting.