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A Legendary Monster, born in the depths of a Mana Volcano, finds itself stranded in the middle of a desert after the volcano erupts. With no civilization around to welcome it, it must survive on its own until a caravan discovers it and offers to take it to the nearest mobile city - The Free City of Tiphor.

This is my first story on Royal Road, and personally I don't think it is going to be very good. I am by no means a writer, and this is just something I want to throw around. I've been dreaming this up for a while, inspired by this show and that book, and now I am finally getting around to doing it. Any positive criticism is appreciated as it will help me grow as a writer. But seriously, please don't expect it to be any good.

Release Schedule: 1 Chapter every 2 days, or more if I get extra motivated.

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