Romance - plus Judgemental Powers? Completed

by DavidWynne

Original HIATUS Drama Fantasy Romance Low Fantasy Multiple Lead Characters School Life
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Blue was a red headed boy who desperately wanted a girlfriend. So he asked the class beauty to walk home with him.

She very nicely refused him.

So he asked another girl in the same class, one with an average rating in the social status ranking.

She also refused him.

So, still desperate, he thinks – “I’m probably at the bottom of the ranking for boys in this class, so how about I ask the girl who is also at the lowest ranking?”

The girl’s name was Pink.

She said yes.

Gulp. “What do I do now?” was his reaction.

Well, obviously, have a romance.

And, along the way, they get one hell of a lot more than they bargained for.

Like, for example, supernatural Judgemental Powers. How did they get those?

And that was only the start.

The two most insignificant students in their class become famous. Not just in their class or even in their school, but to the population at large. They end up breaking and making the top politicians and rulers of their country.

But finally, of course, they get what they wanted. A committed relationship.

This is an Esmeralda the Angel of Death story. It follows on from my previous novel “Maybe it would have been a good idea not to wish for a harem?”, however it is a totally separate story with only a minimal overlap in the characters. There is no need to read the first story to enjoy this one.

Although you just might enjoy the first story also…

This story has multiple characters and multiple Points of View. Every POV change is clearly marked with a new header. Inside each POV section, the POV character’s thoughts are in italics.

This story has about 105,000 words (about 380 RoyalRoad pages). It is fully written and proof read (the poor man’s proof read using Word). It has 25 chapters, and will be published at the rate of roughly one chapter per day.

The front-page photo is by Valentin Antonucci from Pexels

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Loving it! a bunch of unique characters doing a unique job. Very good.