The Comma

The Comma

by obran

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

So many litRPG stories are about a person who gets hit by a bus, heroically saves the girl, and then gets put into a game environment while that person is in a coma.  

This is not that story.

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The enima of my enemy is my friend

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