True self

True self

by Lummox

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

A girl was borne, and her parents loved her, sounds normal, right? Well, that love became frayed when at the age of five the girl started growing horns and a tail. The other villagers called her a Demon, the parents became outcasts, having to move from village to village when people grew violent. To make a long story short, they ran out of money, so they decided to sell the girl into slavery. One person can have large footprints, this one girl's struggles against unfairness will change the world forever.

Authors note: Hey guys, guess What? I have only gone and done it again. This story has been percolating for a while now, and I just had to write it down before I forget half of it. I figured I could post it here and see how it does, this will be another story without a set schedule. I will write when I feel like it, maybe something like once a month, but don't hold me to that. This will in no way interfere with Naga rising, so there's no need to worry, anyway, I hope you enjoy.

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Great start to a series. fairly well written but at this point there is not to much in the way of character development or background.