Primordial Flame

Primordial Flame

by Cognoscere

Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

A world filled with the beasts of myth, capable of taking on human form, has seen them imprison their creators and form an alliance known as The Covenant.


A member of this alliance, the commander of the Phoenix Legion and heir to the throne of its namesake beast finds herself on the wrong end of inter-alliance politics.


With the aid of a member of the one mythic race who did not join The Covenant, she finds that the conspiracy that targeted her goes much, much further back than anyone could ever imagine.

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for an author who claims this is his first, he already makes use of quite a few excellent writing techniques. By far my favorite would have to be his use of dialogue as a story teller. The interaction between the characters points out subtle things the reader should look for in the future, without boggling us down with too much information all at once. Couple that with great sentence structure and grammar, and you have a great novel in the making!

Plus, I'm a sucker for political corruption and mystery >.<

It's a good read so far and is worth your attention :)