The Lair of Time

by Tycomaru

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Dungeon LitRPG Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
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Mysterious death. Second chance. Punishment. This is what one man woke to after somehow dying. With no full memory of how he died he was told his second chance was actually a punishment. Now Kronos must prove his existence is worth something or be erased from it completely.

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Stephen Lewis
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Early review: I enjoyed this

Ch18

This was enjoyable the style and story were great  

The only thing that pulled me out of the story were the typos and accidental "n"s instead of spaces 

Edit ch 22 increase in spelling errors 

Edit ch28 (epilogue) Overall pretty good story 

TLDR: worth a try enjoyable read

Ringostrauss
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It's a bit of a variant on dungeon core, but avoids the need for growth through killing by making it more about area management.  it almost feels like a fantasy version of Civilization written into an engaging story.  So far it is fun give it a try.

Ulvlar
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The story is good, however the grammer is terrible.

Remnant of Rot
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*he said in a cultivator accent*

Ok but seriously I'm not even through the first chapter and I love the style of writing and the emotion

Plas keep it up author Chan(:

motthi
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I have quite enjoyed this story so far. (Chapter 19 as of writing this) and it is fun to read about Kronos doing his thing. He is fun to watch and I am excited to see him finally in action. I am somewhat sad that he appears to not be the main character of the second part :c In all honesty, I have no interest in Eric though I suppose I cannot tell you how to write your story! I just hope to see more of Kronos in the future :3