Crown of the martyr and martyr of the Crown.

by sarvashaktimaan

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Anti-Hero Lead High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Mythos Non-Human lead Reincarnation Secret Identity Strong Lead
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An undisputed being sits upon his throne, the Crown of damnation adorning his head. One gaze enough to make gods tremble, and one wave of his hand enough to make the mightiest of demons flee. An unfathomable cataclysm will surely arrive when such a being is slain and grasps another chance to walk among the living.

This is a story of a monarch more ancient than time itself defying the absolution of death in his eternal strive to accomplish his primordial goal. 

And the Crown gazes on ravenously, its curse awaiting its next martyr.

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Story with an overpowered mc who still thinks with his brain, not muscles. I believe I put my own twist on the reincarnation trope. The story is mostly told from third person view with mc’s perspective. New chapters are released 3 times a week.

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This is an updated synopsis after requests from viewers.

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I do not own the cover picture.

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Ihateeverything
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Amazing, just nerds faster release rates

Im lazy af, so just gonna say: forgotten conqueror 2.0.

(it isnt a copy, its its own thin)

th30dor
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Description of the story is trash

If you want people to  actually open the first chapter and read your story, you need to have something better than an edgy picture and some generic worthless quote that doesn't say anything about what and how the story is.

In a website as saturated at this one, no one will take the chance to read a story to figure out what the hell it's about, when other stories spell it out in the description.

As for the story itself, its fine. 

1HP_and_a_dream
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A wonderful story thus far (02-10), only marred by sporadic errors in sentence structure or grammer.

The characters are well written and act how they are described; a cowardly character would try to avoid conflict etc.

Nicholas Morgan
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I do not review many stories here. Often, the author starts out strong and interesting, only to falter. This story starts out a bit weak and perhaps a bit genetically. However, the characterisation grows into something worthwhile. The author here understands, succinctly,the power  fantasy. She ,or he , understands that a truly strong character needs not be the best in the moment, but should have the potential to be so. What follows then,is  the reader being taken along a journey where there is risk and potential. This story might not be the best, but it had potential and is worth your time.

 

Ps. I must applaud the writing for showing understanding that a world , when created, has its own rules and morals. The author does not try to put incessant moralising of contemporary society into a fantasy world. The author allows his/her world to breathe and allows the characters to act as is fitting to their setting and their nature. 

Sir L
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He's not an idiot!!!

Personally, I just adore how the main character is actually thinking about his actions, the consequences of them and what he wants/needs to do in the future. His entire personality and his decisions also match perfectly. You also manage to balance his constant scheming with different events that will cause growth or a shift in mindset, which is even better as it is usually difficult to strike a balance like that. You're also demonstrating a harsher side to the whole reincarnation as a noble trope while keeping it at a point where it doesn't make the readers feel uncomfortable at everything.

I also absolutely adore the story's concepts as well as the slow yet steady revelations of the world's lore which has a connection with the main character instead of being used as some sort of plot armour or reason that the main character suddenly gains a stupid amount of power like some other stories.

Keep up the good work man!

Andross Guile
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So, this could be a subpar Andur story. You have an OP MC with an OP potential romantic interest and it's an isekai story. 

It's slightly different though because it's far more flawed. There are elements of xianxia in this and sadly the writing style and tropes of that genre bleed over. To intricately describe one's plans to a rival while they're alive is retarded. It doesn't matter if you're the son of the creator, it's stupid. 

The style is bad, the grammar needs work. I'm interested in the story and in the characters. 

To the author: After you've finished book 1 rewrite this. Obviously, we're alpha readers but we're not enough. Either hire a decent editor or, if you can't afford one, use some editing software.

JF41C0N
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Well-thought Stories inside a Greater Plotline

It is beyond me how such a novel could be completely ignored, while others, in spite of their incredible mediocrity and lack of decent plot, get showered with praises and reviews (Yes, I'm looking at you Trailer Trash). In Crown of the martyr, characters have distinct personalities and are consistent in their lines of thought - you can tell who is speaking even when not explicitly said -, there is a sense of direction and purpose from the beginning of the story (no randomly wandering, doing random things protagonist for once) and the sub-arcs have very interesting twists, keeping the reader interested in the smallest details. 

It is not perfect by any means: the beginning seems quite generic, despite the good writing quality, and there are some eventual slip-ups in grammar. But as a whole, this novel went above expectations and again, well deserving of 5 stars.

If you like reincarnation stories and well-thought characters, try it and you will not regret it.

shin chan
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Good story as of now worth reading

Story as of now is great, manipulation and scheming, one of the few reincarnation done right on RR

 

Let's start from the beginning the synopsis is for me bad if not bored enough one may not read and does not give insight to the story

The reincarnation feature was I'd say best on RR cause let's be serious if I look from the view of an adult(let's leave being an immortal out) after reincarnation if you act like a little kid and show similar behaviour I will stop reading the story cause for me it's not worth reading...

The author has made sure that the basic rule of reincarnation is followed 

The author has given the mc nice and intriguing back story that may make one think another super OP mc story but it is not 

The story till now has a great plot and manipulation and scheming which the author portrays well but I feel that the author can improve in this aspect a lot 

(Note to author try and finding some novels with their man as manipulation cause the story as of now has potential for this field to be the main field)

Style and grammar: didn't find any mistakes personally, but  wasn't looking for them. The author is able to portray a scene well but a little more descriptive will work wonders

Character most of the characters I think have been fleshed out well not all have got backstories but i personally feel that not all do need it

heteaho
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Well written story

Nothing wrong with this one quality wise. But be warned, the mc is despicable. Imagine a Hitler or a Stalin as an mc, and you'd be close. And the people around and his parents are really not much better.

Avagantimos
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Overused concept done RIGHT

Let’s get this out of the way. This is a op Mc reincarnation story. Yes, the Mc will always be the strongest person in the room. Uncharacteristically 

The characters are all interesting and some tend to be more interesting then Irwyn at times. Also, Irwyn does feel like he is ancient, unlike other MCs that are incredibly old yet still act like teenagers at some point. 

As of chapter 34 (2-29) there isn’t a super clear goal as to what’s intended for the future, however the pace of things so far is in a nice jog -not too fast and not too slow- which makes reading this a pleasure.

Best of all I think, is that the quality is almost at the point that I could easily see being sold on Kindle.

 Edit: I just saw IHATEEVERYTHING’s “lazy” review and completely agree in his amazing review this story is Forgotten Conquerer 2: Electric Boogaloo. It’s not a copy of FC but they do share similarities in their overall tone. If you liked Forgotten Conquerer even a little, then you should check this story out