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Lily thought her senior year of high school was going to be like everyone elses, but as she takes her little sister around Halloween night, the world changes in a drastic way. It all starts when a green light flashes across the sky. Her neighbors collapse, but when they rise they change.

Lily needs to keep her sister safe in a now zombie filled world as they seek their parents and help others along the way.

Please note there will be blood, gore and violence.

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An Exciting Zombie Story [Early Review]

Reviewed at: Chapter 6 .

I'm still not very far into this story (chapter 6 ar the moment), but I'm really enjoying it so far. I've always loved zombie movies where the apocalypse is the result of a disease or something along those lines. This story doesn't follow that trend. Instead, the apocalypse starts with a flash of green in the sky. Suddenly, one in every four or five people is undead. I was a little unsure about this onset at first, but I get the sense that there is more to the world than the MC knows and the book intends to explore it. And if that's the case, I'm all in.

The author does a pretty good job with grammar too and seems pretty comfortable in her writing. If you like zombie stuff, I recommend you check it out!