Golden Fox with System

by Lucas Cristian

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Harem Magic Martial Arts Reincarnation Strong Lead Supernatural Wuxia Xianxia
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The Brazilian Theo Volts, 18 years old, reincarnates in the body of a (Red-fox) in another world, when dying being struck by lightning. After reincarnating, he realized that he was endowed with a miraculous game system.


{Edited by: Andrew Meyers}

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Ranking Information ago
Chapter 1: New life. ago
Chapter 2: Skills ago
Chapter 3: Buying a Pill. ago
Chapter 4: Helping the Red Fox. ago
Chapter 5: Impurities ago
Chapter 6: Creation of the Magic Core. ago
Chapter 7: Beginner Pack ago
Chapter 8: Cultivation Technique ago
Chapter 9: Compressed stone of Mana. ago
Chapter 10: Advancing to 6th Layer of the Apprentice Kingdom. ago
Chapter 11: Fighting against Wolves. ago
Chapter 12: Advancing to the Student Kingdom. ago
Chapter 13: Lord Goblin. ago
Chapter 14: Finding a Village ago
Chapter 15: Mental Energy ago
Chapter 16: Leaving the Ang Village. ago
Chapter 17: Dragon ago
Chapter 18: Dragon's Egg ago
Chapter 19: Cultivation Duo? ago
Chapter 20: Lineage ago
Chapter 21: Golden Flames. ago
Chapter 22: Elementary Pills. ago
Chapter 23: Yuki Lineage ago
Chapter 24: Training with Yuki. ago
Chapter 25: 10th Tier of the Student Kingdom ago
Chapter 26: Mei Zong ago
Chapter 27: Island of the Falling Star ago
Chapter 28: Fighting Black Wolves: Part 1 ago
Chapter 29: Fighting Black Wolves: Part 2 ago
Chapter 30: Demi Humana Shina. ago
Chapter 31: Moving to Vila. ago
Chapter 32 ago
Chapter 33: New technique. ago
Chapter 34: forge ago
Chapter 35 ago
Chapter 36 ago
Chapter 37 ago
Chapter 38 ago
Chapter 39: Shina vs Goblins ago
Chapter 40: Human form ago
Chapter 41: Feelings of Yuki ago
Chapter 42 ago
Chapter 43 ago
Chapter 44 ago
Chapter 45 ago
Chapter 46: Battle field. ago
Chapter 47 ago
Chapter 48 ago
Chapter 49 ago
Chapter 50 ago
Chapter 51: M-My daughter and Theo ?? ago
Chapter 52: Going to sleep with Yuki ago
Chapter 53: [Status] ago
Chapter 54: Dark Wolf ago
Chapter 55: Wolf Zaira ago
Chapter 56: Helping the Crimson Wolf, Zaika. ago
Chapter 57: A...A lineage? !! Seriously? ago
Chapter 58: Services? What kind of Services? ago
Chapter 59: A Mission Has Appeared ago
Chapter 60: White Lion King's Tomb Part 1 ago
Chapter 61: White Lion Kin's Tomb Part 2 ago
Chapter 62: White Lion Kin's Tomb Part 3 ago
Chapter 63: White Lion Kin's Tomb Part 4 ago
Chapter 64 White Lion King's Totem ago
Chapter 65: Secret Room. ago
Chapter 66: Level 5 Armor ago
Chapter 67: New Shina and Yuki cultivation Techniques. ago
Chapter 68: <Nine-Tailed Fox Divine Practice> ago
Chapter 69: Obtained 81,150,451 System Points. ago
Chapter 70: 6th Layer of the Higher Student Kingdom. ago
Chapter 71: My Hero! ago
Chapter 72: Are you… the Golden Fox? ago
Chapter 73: Young Master of the Ming Family ago
Chapter 74: Death of Young Master Alex. ago
Chapter 75: Panic Interview! ago
Chapter 76: Precious Stones Sisters. ago
Chapter 77: Entering Ang Village ago
Chapter 78: Barbecue at Jka’s House Part 1 ago
Chapter 79: Barbecue at Jka's House Part 2 ago
Chapter 80: Auction Part 1 ago
Chapter 81: Auction Part 2 ago
Chapter 82: 2nd Layer of the Apprentice Wizard Kingdom ago
Capítulo 83: You Are Zing Lin Ming! ago
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Yinko
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Not planned out at all

The start of it works rather well actually, he focuses on building his foundations by getting skills and hunting animals that pose zero risk.  He avoids civilization and trains his skills up over time. 

 

The problems arrive once that first period ends.  The way the author uses the system changes via plot device to move a bunch of skills under the singular heading of a lineage, his cultivation also gets merged into that lineage.  This would have been a good idea to start with but makes no sense half way through the story.  He also bought all the skills he could at the lowest cultivation rank but never bought any more.  This seems mostly just like the author got lazy about keeping up with skill advances.  His system also allows him to gain essence from killing things, but he quickly gets so many other ways to do the same thing that this becomes redundant and is never really used again. 

 

The next big problem is one shared by a lot of stories, the introduction of new characters via methods that make little sense.  First a dragon's egg falls into their laps, and is then used as a plot device to make the main love interest a special-snow-flake.  Then a betrayed and abandoned little demi-human shows up who he immediately spends a rediculous amount of points on, in the process revealing the secret of his system to a complete unknown.  Followed by moving into civilization for no actual reason. 

 

I feel that if the author had planned out the system and the plot it might have been good. 

Andrew Meyers
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Gentle Cultivation slice of life

Updated as of 2019-08-12: I've read through to Chapter 90, and here are my thoughts so far:

Overall:

This fiction is a translated cultivation story with some innocent 'cuteness' slice of life mixed in. MC is OP and a bit oblivious to his OP-ness. Supporting characters are warm and helpful. The overall pacing is relatively OK with it focused on MC's rapid advancement at absurd rates (he does in a couple of weeks what ordinary people take a couple of decades to accomplish).

Style: Enjoyable for me; it has a standard cultivation/'slice of life' style of storytelling.

Story: It is a cultivation power trip in a sandbox, with some character interaction and minor sub-plots. There are some villan characters that pop up eventually (and are VERY easy to hate), but they get squished promptly so long-term there aren't really any realistic opponents so far.

Grammar: Pretty good for a translation, there's always awkward parts when trying to do that, so I think it turned out well.

Character Score: Characters are flat, simple, but likable. MC has no backstory, his obliviousness to 'before' he started never gets addressed (how did he appear there with Yuki?). MC's sole motivation is protecting himself and his companions. He's a simple power fantasy template, and it is starting to flow into a semi-oblivious harem trope, although there is some minor action but it is just making out so far.

True_Mercury
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Pretty good so far, looking forward to more

I'm definitely biased towards reincarnation into non-human stories, but there's potential in this story.

So far the story is pretty good, I enjoy seeing growth in abilities or situations for the characters. That said, the chapters feel short, there's room for more in between time skips. 

 

Magdragon
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5 stars because the troll Baggge

Just because so many writers leave cause trolls like this.

Baggge
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Mybe a good story idk to painfull to read

The wrigting need a lot of work there are spases constandly and the sentenses dont feal natruel there are a over use of the same, he he he his he