The Way of Sages

by Hu10997110

The accounts of the orphan that grew to challenge empires, slay demigods and win the hearts of princesses. Fabled to be a natural genius of combat and magic alike, but what they don't see is the mind that dared to do what others wouldn't and the friends and mentors that guided it. Follow Los as he carves his own fate, forms his own magic, and tests his own will.

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Need to enjoy the style.

You definitely need to enjoy a "I have no idea what's going on but the story will probably clarifie the situation in a few chapters" type book to feel exited while reading this. The story just kinda thrusts you right into the plot with no explanation of any key points. Words are thrown around that are made up for the story to represent something... just for the most part there is no explanation of what they actually are. For now I think I will drop this but if the story ever reaches 100+ chapters I will probably return to read it as the plot will be fleshed out better.

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My favourite writing style on royal road but it starts slow! So far the characters are interesting and believable 

There's the odd word missed out but apart from that grammar is great. 

I'm excited for where he takes Los through the book