A man dies, unfortunatly as an atheist he has nowhere to go. Thankfully heaven has a plan for atheists, you get to choose three boons and move on into another world. Charles anthem gets placed in the body of a knight captain and has to find a way to fight off the incomming raiders, hopefully he can find his way to power with nothing but an inventory of shitty masks and skill with runes.

 

This book is mostly designed to workshop ideas and improve my writing for bigger projects down the road, any advice on how to make my writing better would be greatly apreciated. I certainly need the help.

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