Here there be monsters

by legionalle

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

The Hunter and the Prey, the Watcher and the Watched, the Stalked and Stalker. This is a cruel world where if you don't push, the world will push for you, whether or not you want it to.

Yggdrasil is known as the World Tree seeing as though it holds not only all worlds, but also all realities on her branches. So while millions die on one planet, billions are being born across the realities. Eneilond is a world like and unlike many other worlds held by Yggdrasil. It is a place of wonder, but also a place of horror. The strong rule and give no shits about those weaker, till they become the weaker. They think they are the wealthy til they become paupers. This is a world where monsters run rampant hunting all the others ever looking to eat and grow stronger.

(this is my first story please be critical on what needs changing)

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