Rohan's Calling Online

by CrAJywood

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy LitRPG

Meet Rohan… a real world NPC

What would it be like to face death in a VRMMORPG?

Rohan is about to find out. When he receives a chance to play Prithvi Online for free, he accepts it. While it’s fun to get a salary to play, things are not as they seem in the game world or even in the real one. The ultimate quest awaits Rohan, and he must select "Accept".

Along the way Rohan must kill mobs, unlock skills, make friends... and hopefully not get kissed by death.

 (note that this book is a revised version of my permadeath series)

 

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kronosxviii
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Desperately Needs an Editor

I wanted to give this a try since I've noticed that it updates quite often, but my god the errors.  I made it to chapter four before I started swearing at the story for all the immersion breaking errors.  Ragequit after chapter twenty as I just couldn't focus on the story enough to stay interested.

Youshay
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The novel is weak but is growing.

This novel sure does needs a lot of improvement.
Character description and development is less.
Scenario description is less.
Style is old with a few loopholes.
The story is good but the settings and scenes are bad.
Action description is brief and unsatisfactory.
Plot twists are moderate.
The naming is complicated...some names ar just too difficult.
Timeline is improper.
Stats description is improper.
 
There are some interesting and new contents that give kick... And some sour contents that kill the mood.
 
It's currently an average rated novel but have potential.