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A story about Parker Stern, a depressed, angry bastard, who does his best to survive on his Earth, a planet of Powers, Hero's, Gods, and Pariahs. 

 

I'm totally novice to writing books, but I really want to and so I am. Constructive criticism is always welcome, and I really hope that you enjoy the book!

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