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Every 50 years 5 individuals are chosen, at random, to receive gifts of power, oriented toward their interests, in order to shake up the world order. The only restriction being that they be loners, seperated from every day society so as to give them a chance to develope their new found power before those who may seak to maintain the status quo snuff them out. Jared Thorne woke to find himself gifted with the Game Character subspecies. Although starting out weaker than other chosen,past and present, his potential is far greater.

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The story seems to be stalled. Pity, it's a good OP wish fulfilling yarn. MC is interesting. Plot is interesting. For those that care, content is R18 and the author isn't a virgin. So...

The story has been rewritten at least once.