ETERNAL FREEDOM

ETERNAL FREEDOM

by Daoist_Paradox

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content

Tags: Adventure, Romance, Mystery.

What do you do when you are kidnapped and forced into a fantasy world ?
1. Create a guild.
2. Found a kingdom.
3. Rule the world.
4. Become a peerless existence.

Param: Why not do it all ?

Author's Note : I do not own the image on the book cover.

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Leonardo Nascimento
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I really like this story, but the way the author has chosen to show the world is so boring, that I almost didn't finish it. The MC is good, but the side characters are all whatever, I can't care about then.

There's some good parts that's is making me read this book. The way the mc has to develop his own coltivation tecnic is cool. But the author don't tell how he did it, just that he did. Particularly I don't like this, I like novels where I can read every step of what is happening, not a lot of scenes of what happened without telling how.

Vic20
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Good story so far i liked it and i think you could add the harem tag

Ziu
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I like how this goes

good novel I like how the relationship of the mc develops with Madhu, by the way I have some doubts:
1) What will the launch rate be?
2) Will there be harem?
3) is there going to be NTR?