Let's Invade A Fantasy World!

by Ani

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Anti-Hero Lead High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore

What happens when you slap Sci-fi and tentacles with Fantasy and LitRPG? You get this.

Our poor alien just wanted to invade a planet. But of course, the pesky humans wouldn't have any of it, and crushed him before he can even land his ship. Now almost all of his survival supplies are gone, and he doesn't know where he is.

Maybe he should have picked a different planet to invade.


Other tag/s: Evolution (and more incoming)

Written for fun. 1300 - 1500 words chapters. Lazy writer, lazy writing. 2 chapters per week. Very lazy indeed.

[Author's Current Work]

>Writing the next chapter
>Lazing around in RR Discord   Spoiler:


[Next Plans]

>World Map (Fantasy Style)
>New cover for new Arc

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Mehx
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Well studs and studdess here's one those those fantasy with creativity,basebuilding(have not seen yet as of chap 9 I am hoping it will come soon),a hole new world,one red slimy boi and rulus to death of course!

I honestly can't find any huge proplem maybe it's becuase it's the start or it's just a very good writer...YOU WILL NEVER KNOW UNLESS YOU READ IT AS YOU SHOULD!

This story that explores a new way to write fantasy(at least first time I saw it) with very good concepts,as I said before creative!The redy boi is the boi to end them all I say!(not saying redy boi is overpowered)

I think that's about it!Its a good story just well a little bit slow for me but don't worry that's my caffeine talking so it should be good for you studs/studdess.

 

 

 

 

 

p.s writer 

I hope you get well soon!

DefinitelyAGiraffe
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Written at Chapter 10 (X)

I found this story when it was maybe at its fourth or fifth chapter, and I've been looking forward for the next release ever since. I didn't think I could find a homicidal slime that wants to kill a planet cute, but here we are.

Style: 
I didn't think that I was a fan of LitRPGs. I still don't think I am, but I just find the idea of how this one works a lot easier. The art of it makes it generally more appealing, more immersive and provides a bit more insight into what the slime sees. Personally, I think that the style makes everything better.

Story:
The idea of a story like this is entirely unique to me, and quite captivating. I just think that at the current time, the main plot is almost forgotten as it focuses on the sub plot a lot more. In my opinion, I feel like it isn't mentioned that much and could make it quite easy to forget that that is the reason, but obviously take that with a pinch of salt. Either way, the story is still incredibly good.

Grammar:
There is quite a wide range of vocabulary and WOW words (I've had to google some of them). Grammar seems to be quite fine, sometimes there will be mistakes like a misplaced comma, or no comma at all. Spelling is occasionally incorrect, but it doesn't drag you out of the story.

Character: 
It's hard to relate to a slime like this, especially considering that it doesn't speak English, but yet I still do. Either that says something glaringly wrong about me, or Ani is just good at creating characters. The fairy seems quite human (for lack of a better word) with a three dimensional personality. Other characters that have showed up seemed relatively fleshed out for how unimportant they actually were.

Overall:
I like this entire story a lot. It feels good, it reads good, there's good art and it's overall quite mesmerizing. It may not be some people's cup of tea, but this is something that I thoroughly recommend that you give a try! 

Paradoxcloud
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To put it simply, this is well written.

If one has ever read or watched parasyte than think of that but it's just the parasite and it's in a magical world.

BoredBeyondBelief
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Non-humans protaganists is my favorite type, if you turn them into a human I will undoubtly burn down the amazon rain forest as a sign of protest.

The style is good, I like the "UI".

Grammar seems fine.

Story is interesting, pretty light-hearted in my opinion, and some what of a Isekai in a sense?

Characters seem average.

gary0044187
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This is definitely a fun and quirky story.  There are some minor grammatical errors here and there but it is not distracting.  I look forward to seeing where this story goes from here. Thanks for the neat story Ani.

rewashington
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Well-crafted story from a non-huam

This story is probably one of the best story's I've come across from the POV of a non-human. The viewpoint of the alien seems authentic and detailed. Traveling on the little slime alien's adventure as he sets out to take over the fantasy world he landed in is a real treat. The author manages to reveal the world and the character's goals without an infodump. Instead, the author shows us the world helping to better immerse us in the storytelling. 

The writing is very polished. No obvious grammar or spelling issues. The style is fluid and the story keeps you reading. The only drawback was sometimes I was unable to relate to the characters. It's a minor issue because I think it showed more how alien the mindset of the main character was and that really brought out the story. 

I definitely recommend giving this story a read if you enjoy non-human POVs.