Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Drama Horror Anti-Hero Lead Grimdark Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Reincarnation Strong Lead War and Military
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An average joe is given the chance to reincarnate into the Star War Universe with some benefits to help him survive in the brutal galaxy filled with death and adventure. However, he isn't getting the disney animated version where all the bad stuff is shunted to the side, and the lines of good and evil are black and white. The lines in this universe are so grey and blurred, sometimes you can't even tell what is good and evil. So why bother?

(Cover is not mine, saw it at https://swfanon.fandom.com/wiki/Gillian_Skirata and I thought it looked pretty cool and relevant to the story, so I am using it for the cover, if you are the owner and you want it gone, PM me)

 (Current release rate is not set due to a hectic schedule, but i will try for 5-6 a week, occasionally more, though they may be uploaded irregularly)

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SauceGodPluto
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Start is good but for most books starts are good. I talked to the author to ask him which was it was going and our looks for the book align it’s all about how he executes it. Will do a full review when he hits around 50 chapters so I can know how he writes and his world building and character depth and etc.

reil-rhiil
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As a long term Star Wars fan I was delighted to see this!

Those familiar with the works of Kestix, I hope I got his name right, will recognize the opening scenes.

First of all, the good stuff!

An excited author with a very solid grasp of the universe they are writing in.

A fairly unique character, with more flaws than virtues and more balls than brains. 

MANDALORIANS!!!

Now, the bad stuff. 

The author is clearly an amateur, same as every author ever at the start.

The grammar, writing style, character development, plot design, and action scenes need work and polish.

The shifts in perspective are clunky and awkward, and the actions and reactions of the MC are far from intuitive or understandable. 

We are expected to somehow understand the character without ever really being introduced to him, which kind of sucks.

Overall, if the author continues to write then these flaws will naturally diminish and disappear as they become more experienced. 

To the author, please take this as constructive critiscm. I truly enjoyed reading what you've written so far, and eagerly await what you will write in the future. 

Chancesimp
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I love star wars stories but it is hard to find good ones this book seems to have some potential to be a good book. This is a new refreshing take on the same usual reincarnation stories. The author is very active in the writing so after a chapter is published he will go back through the story to make sure it makes sense which shows dedication I do not believe he will drop this story anytime soon if ever.  After some more chapters come out I will be back to update this review. 

Dragonightmare
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I love the story so far we rarely get starwars story on royalroad so when we do i tend to get excited and for a beggining writer it is really well written there are points that could be improved which i have no doupt will be improved seeing how the author has eddited some parts of the story shows he can learn and improve as a writer while i would like to give this a higher score i dount think i can comftoribly do that until i see more i will probally come back and update my review latter onlaughing

ShadeHaven
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5 stars total up to at least chapter 4, unlikely to change as time goes by.

Style score- The style is unique, and while it only taps a bit into the reincarnation thing in this case I think that works in it's favor. Though more might come up concerning that. I think there could be 1 or 2 more references made in there about startwars, but only the deepest, darkest geeks would understand them and it might not appeal to all audiences that way. 4.5/5

Story score- The story is doing fantastic. It showed the brutality of Mandalore during the old republic days and how even though he has all sorts of power it doesn't make him strong, just invincible. It represents how these are two different things well. 5/5

Grammer score- Honestly, only one or two things per a chapter i've seen so far, and when you're on RR to show it to the community it makes sense to at least have a little error. 4.5/5

Character score- The character knows his end goal but doesn't know how to get there, and we come along for the ride as he finds this out. The character stays true to his own emotions and doesn't seem to stray from his own path. I personally like OP and non-OP stories alike, as long as they are played off well. This story is one of those stories. The MC is OP in one way, while the other ways he is a complete newbie. Gives room for development and growth, which is good. 5/5

Gandrasch
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The MC is basically immortal, has enhanced genitalia, pisses on a snake and randomly farts. 

I guess it can be a fun read, if you don't mind that though.

Heartbreak 117
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I found your lack of Chad most disturbing...

After a while, a good star wars fanfic come up with an interesting twist.

Character, we only see the MC with not much content yet because this is still a newborn Padawan of a story. But so far so good.

Grammar, no pit hole.

Style, reincarnation story. Normal.

Story, unique. MC was reincarnated in the Old republic era, potentially live to the era of the first order (cannon) or the yuzhan vong war and later (legend).

Overall good story, pacing is good, author is interacting with readers. And he know how to use memes.

 

StephenD
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Ya got a good start.   Please keep em comen.

Amoba
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The only thing wrong with this is 

1 it’s great

2 I read faster than there written 

Tranquilmoth
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Better than average, not quite spectacular but definitely worth a read.