Dark Dungeons of St Joseph

by Brian

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Horror Tragedy Anti-Hero Lead Dungeon High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Strategy Strong Lead Villainous Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Sexual Content

If you died, were reincarnated, and given a job without a choice, aka enslaved in a new world. Would you be happy about it? Would you care if others lived or died? How would you keep sane?

WARNING THE MAIN CHARACTER IS A REAL ASS!  SO IF YOUR OFFENDED PLEASE REMEMBER THIS WARNING.

 

 

Background

I recently ran across a 'Dark Fantasy Rant' by Limyaael on Curiosity Quills Press at https://curiosityquills.com/limyaael/dark-fantasy/ and how such stories never quite got it right.

In her rant, Limyaael hit on many of my disappointments with dungeon core stories that I have had myself.  I’m of fan of "Rise of the Goblin Dungeon" here at https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/8842/rise-of-the-goblin-dungeon  Like like my own first story, it fell by the wayside. However, this left me wanting more cold-hearted dungeon cores. 

In this story, I am trying to bring to light a very dark fantasy dungeon, and I am enjoying putting effort into this.  Hopefully, I can make it entertaining as well.

Please enjoy!

Thank you in advance,

Brian

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Nomad1791
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First off way too early for a advanced review but I like it that much. Got a MC that's an ass but could careless what anyone thinks looking to game every angle. I don't think it's a sistainable story but ill enjoy seeing where it goes and never know maybe the author has it all planned out. Good luck author and thanks for a decent afternoon read . Remind me when your at 50 chapters and ill update the review. 

BoredBeyondBelief
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Character's personality is quite inconsistant, for a coder at least, but lots to read, and a original decent story.Some spelling mistakes, but otherwise fine grammar.