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This novel is a very good source of scientific research for cultrured brethren such as ourselves, and some may say that this book could even become a holy scripture given enough time (presuming there is enough chapters *cough**cough*)
A believable and sympathetic MC. Nuanced and unique world building. A logical magic system. There's no hand waving or blatant inexplicable overpoweredness on the part of the MC. He does indeed have a notable advantage over his peers. However, it's made quite clear on numerous occasions that although he has some decent potential, there are tons of people who can squish him like a bug in a direct confrontation.
The politics and social dynamics of the world are extrely intriguing and thoughtful. It's clear that the author has a fairly high level of intellect. Despite this, the prose is not overly verbose. And appart from fully skippable excerpts from in-world stories/histories/textbooks that are sometimes inserted at the start of a chapter, any limited exposition flows organically. Prospective readers need not worry that the author will tell rather than show.
There are also quite a few erotic scenes, which may not be suitable for all readers. But those who can appreciate such things will find that they are well done: appropriate to the setting, suitably spicy, and not at all contrived under the circumstances.
There are multiple side characters that are believable, three dimensional and likeable. Nonethless, the focus of the vast, vast majority of the story is on the MC -- as it should be. Those like myself, who hate it when an author constantly jumps around between characters, interrupting flow and making you want to skip ahead to get back to the character you care most about need not be concerned here.This is a story about the MC, and the author does an excellent job of making him likeable, interesting to read about, and fun to cheer for.
Grammatically, the author is on point. There are occasionally some minor typos here and there. And I'm not sure how closely the author monitors comments, since I've occasionally seen comments that give him grammatical corrections to typos that ultimately go uncorrected. Nonetheless, they aren't that numerous or egregious and don't significantly impact reader enjoyment.
Overall, I'd highly recommend this story. The only people who should stay away are those who don't like explicit scenes or the idea of an MC who has multiple sexual partners.
Although regarding the latter, it isn't as if the MC is being unfaithful or somehow immoral. The species that the MC is born into produces no biological waste, and does not reproduce sexually, but retains vestigial organs and sexual characteristics that indicate they used to do both (i.e. they're all women that have breasts that don't lactate, vaginas they don't use to reproduce, and anuses they don't use to deficate).
As you find out in pretty much the first chapter, angels reproduce by pumping energy over time into a special feather on their backs, which drop off and become an egg that hatches into another angel.
The MC is literally the only male angel in the world, as far as he and the reader knows. And as far as I can tell, he doesn't actual cause other angels to get pregnant when they have unprotected sex either.
When the MC arrives on scene, it's clear that the angels don't even have a concept of sex, of sexual fidelity, or of nuclear family units. Characters that MC beds, see sex as as a highly pleasureable and intimate massage or something of that nature -- massage that he's best at since he has a vestigial organ that no one else has.
This series is an excellent blend of epic fantasy with amazing world building and truly great erotica. I first discovered this series on literotica where I’ve followed it from chapter one and I must say that never expected the author to post it on RRL.
There are currently 13 chapters out and I can guarantee that none of them will disappoint you. In any case, I love this series to the point where I check for updates everyday even though it usually updates every 2 weeks.
Keep up the good work CapDragon!
Props to world building and excellent character development. Really enjoyed the adult content also. Plus chapter length is spot on imho. Look forward to your future content. Really don’t have any criticisms although caught a few grammar errors that stuff doesn’t bother me unless it’s outrageous and this is a place for amateur writers so I never judge harshly. Although some might find this material simple wish fulfillment you do the genre justice. I often get bored when the drama and world building aren’t done right. You mix eroticism into it well without taking away from the main plot. I prefer plot over naughty bits but truly enjoy when both are weaved together so well.
Like it so far cant wait to see what else happens hue hue hue hue uhe Lol . Keep it up .
Though this story is not for kids, even Mary Poppins will agree that its good.
I had been hesitant to try this story after reading the other reviews. I was expecting a hare-brained, oversexualized, plotless fantasy of sorts. In fact, I feared my expectations would could true after the first chapter. The fight scene in chapter 4 or 5 was also a bit underwhelming.
But then it keeps getting better and better! Chpater 10 had my adrenaline running. The fight scene with Priscilla was spot on.
There is some vivid sexual content but nothing to be afraid of. Quite pleasant and fun if you're horny. Man or woman I'd like to believe.
Coming to the story itself, I must say that while familiar, it is also so unique in the way it is presented. The powers, species, kingdoms, interactions and the overall dynamics are very well described, while still leaving a healthy room for more development. The characters set in very definitely and for most part no one seems too out of place. Not much to say as we haven't really seen much but I am very intrigued and an very eager to see more of this fascinating world.
Finally, on to the characters themselves. Kudos to the author! I love what he has done with his characters. Many writers make the mistake of completely defining their characters in a hundred lines of physical and personaility description. The characters in this story develop with the story and they allow us to form impressions on them without giving a singular tag that defines everything they do. I am so eager to find out more about them.
I am glad I've started reading this series and I hope the author will continue to dazzle us with his work.
I started this with high hopes and boy was i thrilled reading the first few chapters the story was great the writer created an interesting and developed world that sucked you in but later on is where the change happened.
I'm gonna to be mentioning names and other subtleties from the text it won't have a huge change on you read so do as you please.
My discomfort started from the time Rebecca and jin er started getting physical. The physical part had no complaints on my part it was well written the problem is blaze is supposedly from earth and as such wouldn't touch jin er who he viewed as his mother and yet you decide to continue to write blaze having frequent encounters with Rebecca who at the same time is close with jin er it just left a bad taste in my mouth. I'm not saying do away with this its just blaze/writer never addressed blazes feelings over the developments, either you address it or continue on with this ambiguous relationship.it doesn't seem right in my mind for blaze to accept this.
Sorry about the rant for those who read the slight spoiler and for those who didn't, I highly recommend the start of the book it is a thrill and not just the usuall trashy smut.
Thx for the read while it lasted.
Alright, so I wasn't planning on writing a review, but the more I thought about the story, as well as the worldbuilding, the more I felt I had to say whats on my mind.
The story probably isn't meant to be taken seriously, or so I am led to believe. More of a wish-fulfillment erotic last-man on planet type of story. Still. Everything about it threw me outta it. I didn't go into this for the jerk, I can go somewhere else for that. Nah, I was hoping for something interesting at least.
It wasn't interesting.
These are my opnions as well as criticisms.
The Angels, despite being a long-lived race are held to the same standard as humans. Intellectually and somewhat physically. And the MC is put on this pedistal by both the author, himself and the people around him. By that I mean that everyone is so 'astonished' on how he's so smart and strong. It screams JERK ME OFF MORE DADDY. Especially when the MC says, even if it's a joke, "becasue I'm awesome" when people ask on how hes so 'competent'.
A long lived species should easily outclass humans. They have bascially the same mathmatic and scientific understanding as humans, yet it takes their species DECADES to learn it. Think about it, what a human could learn in a few years, takes Angels till like age 60 to fully comprehend. What, are they literally descendants of birds? In this world, learning and understanding takes way too long.
What ticked me off the most was the authors note about how "Everyone below the age of 40 is going to be in a platonic relationship with the MC. OFC IT DOESN'T APPLY TO THE MC SINCE HE WAS HUMAN BEFORE". The thing that still revolves constantly in my head is how can someone that has lived for 10 or 20 years be on the same mental level as someone who has lived for 30 or 40? Being human shouldn't make the MC special.
The double standard is pretty ridiculous. Author talks about no relationships with those that he percieves are 'too young' yet MC is younger in both body and mind.
All the girls literally act their appearance, not age. You know, wisdom comes from age and experience and the things you learn come more easily as generations progress. Idk how Angels are so slow in intellect as well as industrial development.
Whats more off-putting is how the MC acts. My god is he annoying. He acts like a child. I understand that he technically is a child, but apparently he lived till 19 on earth. He should at least show that hes struggling with mental maturity while his body is young. Even though body maturity has nothing to do with mental maturity. Maybe only during puberty, but thats a different subject altogether. Do Angels even go through puberty?
Now, onto how the MC gets into anothers pants. Its stated that sex isn't understood. MC takes advantage of this and says stuff like its a massage. What I don't get is how Angles have absolutely no idea about pleasure. I can get behind different moral standards and whatnot. Different outlooks too. But no one has ever gotten intamate with each other? At all? yet they still retain instincts from a time when there was possibly male Angels? They somehow don't know what an orgasm is.
This novel has a lot of problems. I got to chapter 10.1, might continue to see where it goes. I'm not gonna be too much of a dick and rate this stroy with 0.5 scores since this scoring system is fucked., but I refuse to praise this novel like other reviewers.