The Whimsical Dungeon

by TwistedWhimsy

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Dungeon Female Lead GameLit High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Supernatural

After being mauled to death by a pack of wolves, Crystal chooses to reincarnate as a dungeon core... what could go wrong?

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FrequentFailure
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there's only 14 chapters so far so there's not much to review, it does however make me feel warm and fuzzy when reading it so... yay?

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Jakylorhide
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Great Rewrite! (New as of Aug 2018)

Reviewed at: Chapter 8: A Bone to Pick Part 1

Really enjoying the new direction that adds some much needed structure and makes a lot more sense :3 looking forward to where its going!

-Written after chapter 8

Althayas
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Whimsical as it’s title said, if the story develop to a pirate themed dungeon, I will follow with pleasure.

somebspelling problems, but minors.

i regret for the selling of the wine, selling at auction could make us discover another part  of the world, on another too much DP  would overpower the dungeon core.

Scipio231
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A Dungeon sets up shop in an old, apparently quite famous, ship. Should be an interesting ride. Slightly foolish 'evil' villains so far, the author may wish to tone such things down in the future. Nonetheless quite the decent read, and I'm looking forward to more. 

magical heart
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It's a decent story but it takes forever for her to finally ditch building dungeon which is what the story is supposed to be about its descent from there I guess.