A Cheap, OP Brawler

by Orange_Rain

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Anti-Hero Lead Dungeon GameLit Harem High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Mythos Portal Fantasy / Isekai Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

A young Japanese man with eyes that take him as a 'demon,' Jinma Kotori, is killed by his former shady company and gets a second chance to live in a new fantasy RPG-like world as a bodacious goddess' 'Champion.' He begins his new life with the world's default starter class, a Brawler, and a defense-based blessing. Much to the goddess' surprise, Jinma's stats were already high for a human before the blessing was granted, and his first encounter in the new world of Raiza is a high-leveled, Special Monster ...

A typical isekai harem story with video-game mechanics and OP MC with monster girls as his main focus of love interests. Adult language, scenes, and content involving sex and gore are to be expected. Viewer discretion is advised.

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This story is also published on webnovel.com

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: One Life Ends, Another Begins ago
Chapter 2: Out of the Cave ... ago
Chapter 3: ... And into the Spider's Web. ago
Chapter 4: An [Un]Ordinary Dinner ago
Chapter 5: A Tailoress' Goals ago
Chapter 6: The White Rapture ago
Chapter 7: The Slaves' Breakout, Part 1 ago
Chapter 8: The Slaves' Breakout, Part 2 ago
Chapter 9: The Beginning of the Resistance ago
Chapter 10: Rasholl, 'Protector of the Night' ago
Chapter 11: Rupturing the White Rapture, Part 1 ago
Chapter 12: Rupturing the White Rapture, Part 2 ago
Chapter 13: Rupturing the White Rapture, Part 3 ago
Chapter 14: Jinma Versus Gin ago
Chapter 15: The Cursed Weapon's Genocide ago
Chapter 16: The Merciless Demon Rises ago
Chapter 17: The Slave Rent Free-Trial ago
Chapter 18: Stirring Feelings ago
Chapter 19: Lamias can be Sly ago
Chapter 20: A Foreboding Feeling ago
Chapter 21: A Lascivious Welcome ago
Chapter 22: A [Suspicious] Breakfast with a Lord ago
Chapter 23: The Lamia Lord's Motives ago
Chapter 24: The Cursed Misfortune Tanto of Nyra ago
Chapter 25: Valuables for a Noble Cause ago
Chapter 26: A Grand Reveal ago
Chapter 27: A Great Price ago
Chapter 28: Hero Treatment ago
Chapter 29: Confessions, Part 1 ago
Chapter 30: Confessions, Part 2 ago
Chapter 31: Dress-Up ago
Chapter 32: Plans for the Future ago
Chapter 33: Slave Redemptions ago
Chapter 34: Adventurer's Guild ago
Chapter 35: Proving One's Worth ago
Chapter 36: Putting in Good Words ago
Chapter 37: Rankings, Part 1 ago
Chapter 38: Rankings, Part 2 ago
Chapter 39: Rankings, Part 3 ago
Chapter 40: Establishing Terms ago
Chapter 41: The First [Assigned] Quest ago
Chapter 42: A Dragon's Findings ago
Chapter 43: An 'Extended' Sexual Education ago
Chapter 44: Declaration of Courtship ago
Chapter 45: Rewards ago
Chapter 46: A 'Killer' Resolve ago
Chapter 47: Experimental Interrogation ago
Chapter 48: A New Dress and a Great Feast (End of Vol. 1) ago
Chapter 49: Changing Before the Bath (Vol. 2 Start) ago
Chapter 50: Cleaning Before the Bath ago
Chapter 51: Salts and Lubricant Before the Bath ago
Chapter 52: Kissing in the [Dirtied] Bath (Umeiyon, Part 1) ago
Chapter 53: Kissing in the [Dirtied] Bath (Ren & Erizora, Part 2) ago
Chapter 54: Expectations and the Adventurer's Association ago
Chapter 55: Three Children and a Man in Black ago
Chapter 56: A Big Fat Dragon Courtship ago
Chapter 57: Courtship Benefits, the Brawler Class, and Promotions ago
Chapter 58: Promises and Memories ago
Chapter 59: A Fallen Centaur's Melancholy ago
Chapter 60: A Centaur Warrior's Servitude ago
Chapter 61: The Antagonizing First Summons ago
Chapter 62: To Be Contracted, To Be 'Tamed' ago
Chapter 63: The Awkward Second Summons ago
Chapter 64: To Acknowledge One's Worth ago
Chapter 65: A Bitter Reunion and a Werewolf's Regression ago
Chapter 66: The Assigned Quest's Dangers ago
Chapter 67: To Borrow One's Resolve ago
Chapter 68: Pre-Duel Nerves Over Lunch ago
Chapter 69: To Follow Instincts ago
Chapter 70: Jinma vs. Eugus ago
Chapter 71: A Centaur's Pride and Joy ago
Chapter 72: The Terror of the Skies ago
Chapter 73: The Party that Lives from Dawn to Dusk and Dawn Again ago
Chapter 74: A Dragon's Pampering ago
Chapter 75: Special: The Musings of a Lonely Pussy ago
Chapter 76: A Home in the Brawler's Future ago
Chapter 77: A Welcoming Feast and a Brawler's Intervention ago
Chapter 78: To Not Live With Regrets ago
Chapter 79: Special: ??? ago
Chapter 80: The 'Trapped' Noblewoman ago
Chapter 81: The Underdog Brawler's Very First Fan (End of Vol. 2) ago
A Cheap Character Bio/Ref Sheet (Up to Vol. 2 on Ch. 81) ago
Chapter 82: What it Means to be a Demon (Vol. 3 Start) ago
Chapter 83: The Invasive Inquisitor ago
Chapter 84: Engage! Roaring Thunder! ago
Chapter 85: Bird Watching ago
Chapter 86: Down on One's LUCK ago
Chapter 87: A Confession from the Terror of the Skies ago
Chapter 88: Unexpected Guests and Fruit Tarts ago
Chapter 89: A Vampire's Fury and Her First Fall ago
Chapter 90: Introductions Made, Surprises Revealed ago
Chapter 91: A Lady's Propositions and a Brawler's Unfavorable Route of Fate ago
Chapter 92: A [Slave] Merchant's Concern for their Customer ago
Chapter 93: Owning Feathers and Controlling Hearts (?) ago
Chapter 94: A Day in the Life of the Glamorous Brawler, Part 1 ago
Chapter 95: A Day in the Life of the Glamorous Brawler, Part 2 ago
Chapter 96: Dinner Invites ago
Chapter 97: New City, New Locals, and New Girls (?) ago
Chapter 98: Introducing the 'Skull Bashers' ago
Chapter 99: Sleeping Arrangements ago
Chapter 100: Playing with Birds and Dogs (Tyvera and Ren) ago
Chapter 101: Dinner Preparations ago
Chapter 102: Secrets and Messages ago
Chapter 103: Royal Expectations ago
Chapter 104: Plotting Schemes, Confiding Fears, and Questioning Allies, Part 1 ago
Chapter 105: Plotting Schemes, Confiding Fears, and Questioning Allies, Part 2 ago
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Psirex
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Good start, but degraded fast

It started out good but got ruined for me relatively fast.
If we consider that a Day is 36hours, the MC became one of the most powerful beings in less than a day and worse "developed LOVE" for 4 different women AND leveled from Virgin to a sex god doin foursomes ALL IN LESS THAN 1 DAY!!

I don't hate sex scenes in WN, but if there is no other topic than goin from 1 Sex-scene to another all the time its more like "reading porn". So only 2 stars from me for the premise and the start.

Ttae
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This isn’t a complaint . . .

[As of Chapter 38: Rankings, Part 2]

To me this seems to be just another wish fulfillment reincarnation story where the mc is overwhelmingly powerful and has a new girl thrown at him every chapter or two. And these girls are always inexplicably attracted to him because hes a nice guy AND strong. There is suggestions of a greater plot approaching, but its been simple so far.

So yeah, its definitely my kind of story. Simple wish fulfillment at its finest, its great.

Although, I do find it annoying how the mc can’t stop complimenting the appearance of every girl he meets (and the girls always seem flustered, pleased and a little horny because of it).

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Tl:DR: If you like LitRPG reincarnation stories, than read this.

Fallion
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Great up to chapter 40

I’d give chapter 1-40 4 stars but in my opinion it went a bit downhill from somewhere around there. I haven’t been enjoying the last couple of chapters and couldn’t really get through chapter 47 so sadly my journey ends here.

Saphyron
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Has become a erotic novel instead

To start with the sexual parts and erotica was down on earth and fit quite well into the story.

Lately its become a full-blown erotic novel and it really drags down the story.

Ixde
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Here's the thing about using the present tense when writing a story: it's an immersive, fast-paced style that really draws the reader in and creates immersion, when done right. It's also incredibly difficult to nail, simply because it's really hard to make a story written that way flow nicely. I can remember off the top of my head only ONE, professional writer (Nick Harkaway, for reference), who managed to write something using that style that i really enjoyed.

However, with this type of story, we obviously need a lot of info-dumps and exposition every time a new skill comes up or you need to explain something about a new race/town/whatever, and those always tend to break immersion and feel jarring. Your use of the present tense exacerbates this even further, which overall makes the story kind of unconfortable to read through. It's a pity, because it's actually a pretty interesting work, but i'd have given at least one more star if this was written in past tense.

JackCNemo
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  1. The story is exactly what it says on the tin. So if you're the sort that dreads any hint of an overpowered main character you should probably read something else. If not, then you might find this one a lot of fun.  It does a good job of keeping a large cast of characters distinct and memorable. The plot is interesting, and there's a decent amount of world building and foreshadowing for the future. Also does a solid job with the battles and bed scenes.

 

Downside is some odd grammatical errors.

Solid debut effort. 

Pen: Someone Suspicious
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First off- the description pretty much tells you exactly what you are going to get; especially in the second paragraph. Don't want that? Screw off then. 

However; this is actually higher quality than most stories with 'similar' warnings. The grammar is more than up to snuff, with a few typos interspersed every here and there, and there is of course a few plotholes (My favorite has to do with the time difference, but I'll get to that), but it is a bar higher than most novels that go this route- not to mention already having a thousand pages by the time of this review.

It says what it does, and does it well.

Now- I mention the time difference right? I'm putting this here cause it amuses the hell out of me. So, time in the world the guy goes to is alot different than earth. 90 seconds every minute. 90 minutes (if I remember correctly) every hour. 36 hours in a day, and approximately 420 days in a year. This is a ridiculous time difference. 

To give you an idea- let's take 1 earth day. (We need to convert to seconds cause that's the only constant between them.) multpily by hours (24) = 24. Multiply that by minutes (60) = 1,440. Now multiply by seconds (60) = 86,400 seconds in an earth day.

Now for the other world. 1 day to hours = 36. Hours to minutes (x90) = 3,240. Minutes to seconds (x90) = 291,600 seconds. That's compared to 86,400 seconds of earth time. Roughly 3.3 earth days are equivelent to one other world day (I have actually forgotten the name of the other world atm. Apologies.)

1 other world year, if I have all my numbers right, is 420 days. We can multiply this number by about 3.3 to get the amount of earth days that is equivelent to = 1,386 days. This means that 1 (one) other year is equal to about 4 (3.85) earth years. Which means someone in the other world who is thirteen O.years old is approximately 50 earth years old.

I rest my case.

Arte
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Interesting story here

Pretty good grammar, interesting characters, and what's shaping up to be a good plot. I'd recommend this to anyone who wants to read about an OP character with a mystery to solve about himself. 

Treyon
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Totally awesome...sex is in about c50

NOTE: want to rate it 5. But its displayed as 4.5... something is wrong with the rating

Awesome. Needs more sex scenes!! And plz add Nyra later if mc can allow her to transform from tanto to pixie and pixie to tanto if he cant release her and bang her full.

.... it was a blast reading this. I fkng enjoyed it. My only worry is that mc is getting waaaaaay to many skills titles and levels.so fast that it will likely break the novel unless something is done.

Also train the girls and make them stronger pls

Nothing is worse in a harem novel when the mc is OP and the girls are just background, accesories, etc for the mc. Have each girl get a porpuse. Maybe get a skill where mc can transfer part his stats. Levels. And skillz to the girls so they can get stronger faster and you can keep the mc growth on check. In my opinion its a good exploit since mc can get about 7 times more exp and levels so fast that he can power level the girls

Lynnaryas
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Easy to read, fun characters and nice plot.