A Cheap, OP Brawler
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- Traumatising content
[Currently on Hiatus until October 25th (tentative)]
A young Japanese man with eyes that take him as a 'demon,' Jinma Kotori, is killed by his former shady company and gets a second chance to live in a new fantasy RPG-like world as a bodacious goddess' 'Champion.' He begins his new life with the world's default starter class, a Brawler, and a defense-based blessing. Much to the goddess' surprise, Jinma's stats were already high for a human before the blessing was granted, and his first encounter in the new world of Raiza is a high-leveled, Special Monster ...
A typical isekai harem story with video-game mechanics and OP MC with monster girls as his main focus of love interests. Adult language, scenes, and content involving sex and gore are to be expected. Viewer discretion is advised.
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It started out good but got ruined for me relatively fast.
If we consider that a Day is 36hours, the MC became one of the most powerful beings in less than a day and worse "developed LOVE" for 4 different women AND leveled from Virgin to a sex god doin foursomes ALL IN LESS THAN 1 DAY!!
I don't hate sex scenes in WN, but if there is no other topic than goin from 1 Sex-scene to another all the time its more like "reading porn". So only 2 stars from me for the premise and the start.
I’d give chapter 1-40 4 stars but in my opinion it went a bit downhill from somewhere around there. I haven’t been enjoying the last couple of chapters and couldn’t really get through chapter 47 so sadly my journey ends here.
It started well but the slow release rate combined with the obsession with introducing more and more characters, long paragraphs describing them in detail and constant sex scenes has made the actual interesting part (the plot/action) boring to follow.
To start with the sexual parts and erotica was down on earth and fit quite well into the story.
Lately its become a full-blown erotic novel and it really drags down the story.
First off- the description pretty much tells you exactly what you are going to get; especially in the second paragraph. Don't want that? Screw off then.
However; this is actually higher quality than most stories with 'similar' warnings. The grammar is more than up to snuff, with a few typos interspersed every here and there, and there is of course a few plotholes (My favorite has to do with the time difference, but I'll get to that), but it is a bar higher than most novels that go this route- not to mention already having a thousand pages by the time of this review.
It says what it does, and does it well.
Now- I mention the time difference right? I'm putting this here cause it amuses the hell out of me. So, time in the world the guy goes to is alot different than earth. 90 seconds every minute. 90 minutes (if I remember correctly) every hour. 36 hours in a day, and approximately 420 days in a year. This is a ridiculous time difference.
To give you an idea- let's take 1 earth day. (We need to convert to seconds cause that's the only constant between them.) multpily by hours (24) = 24. Multiply that by minutes (60) = 1,440. Now multiply by seconds (60) = 86,400 seconds in an earth day.
Now for the other world. 1 day to hours = 36. Hours to minutes (x90) = 3,240. Minutes to seconds (x90) = 291,600 seconds. That's compared to 86,400 seconds of earth time. Roughly 3.3 earth days are equivelent to one other world day (I have actually forgotten the name of the other world atm. Apologies.)
1 other world year, if I have all my numbers right, is 420 days. We can multiply this number by about 3.3 to get the amount of earth days that is equivelent to = 1,386 days. This means that 1 (one) other year is equal to about 4 (3.85) earth years. Which means someone in the other world who is thirteen O.years old is approximately 50 earth years old.
I rest my case.
[As of Chapter 38: Rankings, Part 2]
To me this seems to be just another wish fulfillment reincarnation story where the mc is overwhelmingly powerful and has a new girl thrown at him every chapter or two. And these girls are always inexplicably attracted to him because hes a nice guy AND strong. There is suggestions of a greater plot approaching, but its been simple so far.
So yeah, its definitely my kind of story. Simple wish fulfillment at its finest, its great.
Although, I do find it annoying how the mc can’t stop complimenting the appearance of every girl he meets (and the girls always seem flustered, pleased and a little horny because of it).
Tl:DR: If you like LitRPG reincarnation stories, than read this.
- The story is exactly what it says on the tin. So if you're the sort that dreads any hint of an overpowered main character you should probably read something else. If not, then you might find this one a lot of fun. It does a good job of keeping a large cast of characters distinct and memorable. The plot is interesting, and there's a decent amount of world building and foreshadowing for the future. Also does a solid job with the battles and bed scenes.
Downside is some odd grammatical errors.
Solid debut effort.
Here's the thing about using the present tense when writing a story: it's an immersive, fast-paced style that really draws the reader in and creates immersion, when done right. It's also incredibly difficult to nail, simply because it's really hard to make a story written that way flow nicely. I can remember off the top of my head only ONE, professional writer (Nick Harkaway, for reference), who managed to write something using that style that i really enjoyed.
However, with this type of story, we obviously need a lot of info-dumps and exposition every time a new skill comes up or you need to explain something about a new race/town/whatever, and those always tend to break immersion and feel jarring. Your use of the present tense exacerbates this even further, which overall makes the story kind of unconfortable to read through. It's a pity, because it's actually a pretty interesting work, but i'd have given at least one more star if this was written in past tense.
Pretty good grammar, interesting characters, and what's shaping up to be a good plot. I'd recommend this to anyone who wants to read about an OP character with a mystery to solve about himself.
NOTE: want to rate it 5. But its displayed as 4.5... something is wrong with the rating
Awesome. Needs more sex scenes!! And plz add Nyra later if mc can allow her to transform from tanto to pixie and pixie to tanto if he cant release her and bang her full.
.... it was a blast reading this. I fkng enjoyed it. My only worry is that mc is getting waaaaaay to many skills titles and levels.so fast that it will likely break the novel unless something is done.
Also train the girls and make them stronger pls
Nothing is worse in a harem novel when the mc is OP and the girls are just background, accesories, etc for the mc. Have each girl get a porpuse. Maybe get a skill where mc can transfer part his stats. Levels. And skillz to the girls so they can get stronger faster and you can keep the mc growth on check. In my opinion its a good exploit since mc can get about 7 times more exp and levels so fast that he can power level the girls