Deeper Darker

by mooderino

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Sci-fi Cyberpunk Dungeon Multiple Lead Characters Space Opera

Sci-fi dungeon crawler.

Set in the far future when humanity has reached the stars and finds it is not the first to do so. Alien technology has been left behind by a long dead race. Ancient cities, abandoned starships, temples and fortified bunkers all contain artefacts and devices far in advance of what humans have been able to produce. Technology that feels more akin to magic, so powerful it can allow a single person to dominate a star system. But these relics of another time have been left well-defended and behind bewildering and impenetrable security measures. 

There are those who are compatible with the alien technology, who can augment themselves to face the evermore extreme protocols in the depths of the alien ruins, and by doing so attain greater power. And there are those who just want to sell what they find to the highest bidder.

The rewards are high, but you have to be prepared to go further and risk more to discover the greatest secrets of a civilisation that vanished long before the first human walked upright. Secrets that could irrevocably change humanity's future, or end it.

 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue ago
1: Thief ago
2: Warrior ago
3: Prince ago
4: Shopping ago
5: Escape Routes ago
6: Getting Away ago
7: Fixer Upper ago
8: Rule of Law ago
9: Planning for the Future ago
10: Tournament Challenger ago
11: Sister Killer ago
12: Litigation ago
13: Defence of the Realm ago
14: Prepared for Battle ago
15: In Memoriam ago
16: Disproportional Retaliation ago
17: Executive Order ago
18: City Heights ago
19: Recruiter's Dream ago
20: The Sweet Spot ago
21: Launch Window ago
22: SS Brinkman ago
23: Dust Man ago
24: Lift Off ago
25: Swing Shift ago
26: Initiate ago
27: Unpacking ago
28: New Boys ago
29: Team Ubik ago
30: The Nominees Are ago
31: Bonding ago
32: Uniform Beliefs ago
33: Lessons Learned ago
34: Meeting Room ago
35: Suited and Booted ago
36: Alienated ago
37: Directions ago
38: Explorer ago
39: Showman ago
40: Willing Prisoner ago
41: Hidden Purpose ago
42: Chaos Theory ago
43: New Skin ago
44: Faith Electronic ago
45: Honest Work ago
46: Nondisclosure Agreement ago
47: Nighthawks ago
48: Refreshed ago
49: Team Elite ago
50: Take Out ago
51: Enough Rope ago
52: Isolated ago
53: System Breach ago
54: Night Out ago
55: Focus Group ago
56: Criminal Damage ago
57: Worlds Apart ago
58: Hearts and Minds ago
59: To the Rescue ago
60: Planning Ahead ago
61: Public Announcement ago
62: Conflict of Interests ago
63: Enabled ago
64: Uniquely Suited ago
65: Top Percentile ago
66: Raise the Dead ago
67: Dead Zone ago
68: Comprehensive Cover ago
69: Limited Time Offer ago
70: Restrictions May Apply ago
71: Choice Assignments ago
72: Bonus Round ago
73: Network Stability ago
74: Braced for Space ago
75: Stowaways ago
76: Extra Guidance ago
77: Defend Yourself ago
78: Mentally Prepared ago
79: Break Time ago
80: Entry Point ago
81: Update Available ago
82: Stress Test ago
83: Special Delivery ago
84: Extended Clause ago
85: Fork in the Path ago
86: Breathless ago
87: Passenger ago
88: Two Out of Three ago
89: Surf's Up ago
90: Rise and Shine ago
91: Into the Machine ago
92: Joining Forces ago
93: Crisis Management ago
94: Network Connected ago
95: Defragmentation ago
96: Background Check ago
97: Hard Line ago
98: Exit Strategy ago
99: And the Winner Is ago
100: End of the Line ago
Epilogue ago
Book 2 – Prologue ago
Book 2 – 1: Father's Son ago
Book 2 – 2: Captured Informant ago
Book 2 – 3: Part of the Furniture ago
Book 2 – 4: Arbitration Now ago
Book 2 – 5: Return of the Prince ago
Book 2 – 6: Power Cut ago
Book 2 – 7: Chairman of the Board ago
Book 2 – 8: Afloat ago
Book 2 – 9: Slow Motion ago
Book 2 – 10: Networking ago
Book 2 – 11: Landfall ago
Book 2 – 12: Planetfall ago
Book 2 – 13: Abide ago
Book 2 – 14: Windfall ago
Book 2 – 15: Pocket Change ago
Book 2 – 16: City Boys ago
Book 2 – 17: Power to the People ago
Book 2 – 18: Consolidation ago
Book 2 – 19: Enter the Arenod ago
Book 2 – 20: Fight Promoter ago
Book 2 – 21: Mr Bright Eyes ago
Book 2 – 22: Initiate ago
Book 2 – 23: Trigger Point ago
Book 2 – 24: Direct Approach ago
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Steve Moss
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An Outstanding Beginning to a SciFi Adventure

This review is current as of chapter 10.

Three protagonists, a techie gutter thief, a wealthy aristo, and a calculating fighter type.  Each is from a different portion of the galaxy. 

So far the author is just laying background.  So far the setting is rich and complex, the characters interesting. I will be following this story closely. 

thejoker195
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A good story but with its flaws.

Reviewing this as of chapter 28 and while there may not be much to review as concerns the content,I have to say that the grammar,style and general premise is quite good, we haven't gotten to the main dungeon diving and mad adventure yet,but the world building and character introductions have been interesting, heck even me that doesn't really enjoy multiple povs all that much is interested in reading about these character's...atleast for now.

But what I would like to know is why the author refuses to engage his readers on what is obviously a logical inconsistency in his world building?, I don't really expect you to change *your* story because of your readers but atleast clarifying something that seems to be baffling people isn't too much is it. An author shouldn't have to spoon feed the readers every bit of information, sometimes you drop hints and tips then let us draw up conclusions about the story by ourselves, for me that's like half the fun of a good story, but when things in your story just aren't adding up it really kills any immersion that you have built up and yes I'm referring to the Seneca corps, how exactly are they able to carry out mass genocide and the entire galactic community is just there watching them? How can they at will decide to deploy biological weapons against an entire gender and again people just allow them,they don't corporate with the rest of the galactic community and yet they allowed to roam free and haven't been hunted down to the ends of the galaxy? It's not like there are no alliances, you made mention of some kind of treaty that other nations seem to be a part of but which the Seneca corps proudly state that they are not a signatory,that's all good..nobody is forcing them to sign but why are they still allowed into other planets airspace?...the power and threat levels you are doling out to this group doesn't make sense and we don't exactly understand why the rest of the human race aren't pushing back, this people can literally walk up and murder an entire generation of people and the populace would just nod their head like sheep and accept it, are you sure we are still talking about humans?

These are my thoughts 28 chapters in,all said so far it's a good story and would be better if this plot hole in the world building can be addressed. 

 

Malbec
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Suffers the same fate as other Author's fictions

The story had a superb beginning, but -just- like with The Good Student, it has pacing and exposition issues. And just like The Good Student, while I loved and pretty much adored the beginning and had high expectations, it got to such a boring point that I dropped it and lowered my initial rating. First, the author has issues with dragging out unimportant scenes that don't add anything much to the plot, because the same 'stuff' was shown in the same general sense just a chapter or two ago, and the comedy gets old pretty fast. This concerns Ubik in particular, and while I'll avoid spoilers, I'll be honest and tell you that by the chapter 80+-, he feels like an entirely one-dimensional character with no prospects for development. To be frank I have yet to see any character development in any of the author's works. It feels like he's focusing on the narrative so much he forgets that characters are the centre of a good fiction. And credit where credit is due, aside from missing that one singular pillar of a good story, it's pretty damn good. I'm just kinda salty at a second missed opportunity for a great story written by the same guy. Not counting How To Avoid Death On Daily Basis because I stopped with that one too soon for my own liking because of the same issues. I think I'll revisit it at some point, just because how interesting the worldbuilding can be.

claws8367
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Lets just say that a certain arc is one big clusterfuck of plot armor with barely any sight over the situation. Give us a flow chart of the happenings. This is getting too complicated. At this point most people are just accepting this flow of logic because they dont want to reread 30 chapters to confirm its logical or not.  

gingerbread_man
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High expectations weren't disappointed

I'm a big fan of Moodie's other story The Good Student and I followed a link from that to get here. I had pretty high expectations going in and I was't disapointed in the slightest, only 14 chapters released at the moment and it's all the opening moves so far but I'm already seeing the bones of a great story here. Loving the three primary characters so far and as always reading Moodie's dialog is a true joy, can't wait to see them interact with each other.

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My review is current as of Chapter 20.

This book is a thrill ride with pleasant additions of humor. It is action packed and exciting, I could binge this for a long time anywhere, the hooks make the readers crave for more. I certainly dislike the multiple POVs though as character development would be limited here. However, Deeper Darker is brilliant book with excellent grammar and an exciting, developing plot, what more could you ask for?

uictoriam4
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Interesting but with a few glaring plot holes

<Review As of chapter 86> It is interesting no doubt and the Ubik chapters are definitely more than worth it but the plot holes still exist.Still I would recommend it as it is quite interesting.

<Very minor spoilers ahead>

Firstly the big flaws-There is no explanation for Seneca Corps at all and even Vendx corporation is only marginally more believable as many of their seemingly cost-saving measures don't acually reduce cost in the long run and with heavy automation in the stellar human civilization with all it entails of course the few human employees should be idk... better.

       The world building is excellent and it is more character driven rather than having some serious scientific jargon that is very popular in some sci-fi fictions(i.e it is a non-hardcore sci-fi).There are three main POVs and the author implements it very nicely.Of course, the star attraction and the most interesting POV here is that of Ubik and he just gets better and better.It is probably the only reason why I could so easily ignore the few fallacies shere

WitchCraft
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Every chapter makes me genuinely smile.

The writing is good, characters have some actual depth. More importantly, they are all completely unique and so very quirky. Especially, Ubick. Every time I read a new chapter, I pretty much always laugh at his shenanigans, not to mention the digs at everything else. worth a read.

Jakaal
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I guess some will like it.

Was fairly interested in this story up until the introduction of the misandrist supersoldier space nazi amazons threatening genocide en masse for going against them. Even using those tactics as a form of intimidation against entire planets to capitulate to their demands in gross approximation of kangaroo courts with nearly planet wide sterilization on the line.

Yet rather than being viewed as the insane extremists they are they're depicted as a slightly fanatical police force of entire galactic societies.

Not sure if they're supposed to be some kind of commentary on feminism or something but I couldn't get past them.

mike karr
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I thought this was a dungeon crawler???

so the first part of the summary is sci fi dungeon crawler, i read 20 chapters in and not even the slightest hint of that being the case.

The author has taken the monumentous task of putting 3 main characters and switching points of view. While he has been marginally successful in making the readers want to know what hapens to the characters,  hes completely failed in driving the plot or quickly grabbing the readers attention to the plot. 

I CANNOT  state this enough to authors on royalroad in particular, if you want to build a huge backstory for your characters, do it within the confines of the plot. If you adertise a dungeon crawler, start with that and either use flashbacks or some other literary device to teach the reader why the character is doing what he is doing. This is the 3rd book ive ready like this on this site this week and I simply cannot continue ont saying anything.