The 1.000 year Great Sage

by krushandkill

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Reincarnation School Life Strong Lead

History says that each 1.000 years, a Great Sage is born. One that can control amazing amounts of Magic.
And in this world with so many different races, that Great Sage will defend, rule or help one of those races to advance and evolve faster than any of the other races. At least, it used to be like that for the past 5.000 years. But then, I was born.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Prologue ago
Chapter1 –> 15 years before ago
Chapter2 ago
Chapter 3 ago
Chapter 4 –> 5 years later ago
Side Story: Meeting the Elfians By Aria, The Goddess of Creation ago
Chapter 5 –> 3 years later ago
Chapter 6 –> 2 years later ago
Chapter 7 -> Emergency at the Palace ago
Chapter 8 ago
Chapter 9 ago
Chapter 10 ago
Side Story: Visiting the Princess By Aria, The Goddess of Creation ago
Chapter 11 -> The Denar'an Trials ago
Chapter 12 ago
Chapter 13 ago
Author’s Note ago
Chapter 14 ago
Chapter 15 ago
Side Story: Enter the Dragonoid! By Aria, The Goddess of Creation ago
Side story: Hunting in the Eternal Forest By Aria, The Goddess of Creation ago
Chapter 16 –> 5 years after, meeting in the Palace ago
Chapter 17 ago
Chapter 18 ago
Side Story: The Death of a Fallen God! By Aria, The Goddess of Creation ago
Report 19 -> Going to Magic School - Beginning the Report of Examiner Tilia ago
Report 20 ago
Report 21 ago
Report 22 – New friends ago
Report 23 ago
Report 24 ago
Report 25 ago
Report 26 ago
Report 27 ago
World History of Ariansyl By Aria, The Goddess of Creation ago
Report 28 – Problems in class ago
Report 29 ago
Report 30 – New teacher ago
Report 31 ago
Side Story: The life of a Princess By Aria, The Goddess of Creation ago
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Paulo Calado
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A fun and interesting story

The characters are very funny and are fleshed out very well instead of being only the MC's supporter's. The MC himself also develops at a good pace by getting stronger at a decent  and steady pace. The story is written like a script in the beginning but the style changes after the side story after chapter 18 becoming less scriptish.

Tmq5521
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This story is a nice light hearted somewhat comidic fantasy. The writing style is unique and somewhat unusual, however after reading several chapters I found it quite enjoyable.

Ciaina
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Format is.... Just no

Good ideas, but your writing style... Let's just say that whoever compared it to a script nailed it. 

Prefacing every bit of dialogue with the name of who is talking is jarring, and destroys the flow. Not a problem in a script, but pretty glaring in a novel. 

Obviously someone downvoted that review, because constructive criticism is bad  right?

MadKing
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Enjoyabul good start so far. Hes still a child as of chapter 5. not much has happend hes only been training. Not much is known about those around him.

kjoatmon
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Is this a book or a script?

The writer does things like:

Me - this and that

Mom - Bla, bla, bla.

This needs a lot of work to get it out of script form and into book form. Then it will be much easier to read.