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Betatester
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Do not miss this story!

At first glance this story shouldn’t work. A gamer seeking revenge against a corporation has been done to death. It reeks of other novels that have been going on for years. Yet, I find myself eagerly anticipating the next chapter and laughing along at the dialogue.

Once you get past a story line that seems played out you find characters that stand out. Villains that make you want to punch someone. And a storyteller that makes you look forward to the days adventure.

azarth
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Picking up steam liking the direction.

Like the story more and more the further I've gotten. I'm up to chapter 45 now and it's picking up steam and moving in a really fun direction.

Lazy_Hedonist
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Good stuff, promising but to early to tell if its five stars worthy

gnarlytreeman
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Decent story, underrated title. Almost no spellcasting by chapter 32.  Its not so much the awesome mastermind gamer story as it is young teenager story. Fun read anyway.  

Mammoth321
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Pretty interesting so far the mc seems like one that'd be worth reading about, plot so far looks like itll be fun. Didn't see any grammar mistakes, although I'm not an English teacher or anything so there might be? All in all I say give it a shot.

gary0044187
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Story so far is pretty good.  Up til now it follows several tropes of the genre.  Nevertheless, there is a glimmer of something unique here in the attitude the MC has towards use of exploits and whatnot and of course, the MC doesn't have the personality of a troll that so many similar stories from Korea tend to have.  Hope it maintains its uniqueness.