Blood Sapphire

Blood Sapphire

by Possumtail

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity

Think being a dwarf is all about gold and dragon slaying? Think again.

 

 

 

One dwarf's blessing turns into a life-changing nightmare in this thrilling underground adventure. Don't wait, start reading now!

 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: The Discovery ago
Chapter 2: Collapse, part 1 ago
Chapter 2: Collapse, part 2 ago
Chapter 3: Where the Miners Live ago
Chapter 4: The Dwarven Army ago
Chapter 5: The Ghosts ago
Chapter 6: Back in the Mine ago
Chapter 7: Consequences of a New Shirt ago
Chapter 8: A Short-lived Rescue Mission ago
Chapter 9: The King of All That Has Worth. ago
Chapter 10: The Ancient City of the Priests, part 1 ago
Chapter 10: The Ancient City of the Priests, part 2 ago
Chapter 11: Captain Lorsson's Decision ago
Chapter 12: The Trial of Valour ago
Chapter 13: Urist's Transformation ago
Chapter 14: End of the Trial ago
Chapter 15: Battle at the Bridge, part 1 ago
Chapter 15: Battle at the Bridge, part 2 ago
Chapter 16: Reunited, part 1 ago
Chapter 16: Reunited, part 2 ago
Chapter 16: Reunited, part 3 ago
Chapter 17: The Dry Mountains ago
Chapter 18: An Older Place ago
Chapter 19: The Ceremony ago
Chapter 20: Panic on the Mountain ago
Chapter 21: The Battle for the Mountains ago
Chapter 22: The King's Tomb, part 1 ago
Chapter 22: The King's Tomb, part 2 ago
Chapter 23: The Metal Dwarfess ago
Chapter 24: Ensnaring Leather and Acid Needles, part 1. ago
Chapter 24: Ensnaring Leather and Acid Needles, part 2. ago
Chapter 25: Blue Phantoms and Red Raw Flesh. ago
Chapter 26: The Green World ago

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Over all, I'd say it's pretty good.

The pacing was pretty even and fast paced throughout. The plot was cool and the characters seemed well thought out. Grammer was consistently good throughout the whole story.

The end was a little inconsistent with the beginning though. In the first chap he says this is how he became the richest dwarf to ever live, but in the end it sounds like, while being pretty rich, he is certanly nowhere near being the richest dwarf.

Overall though it's a pretty sound story.

Also, if you do write another fic, could you please post an update here telling us readers that you've started it? That way we won't accidentally end up missing a new fic you've written.