Out of Foxes to Give

by Dabombd1g1t1

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Psychological Anti-Hero Lead Grimdark Male Lead Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

When you’re reincarnated as Naruto Uzumaki you do one of two things: cheer because you remember the story and are able to abuse your future knowledge, or realize that you’re in a world where they train child soldiers who throw fireballs and explosions around like candy and reasonably freak out. In a sense you’re either screwed or screwed but you know why.

 

I didn’t really read Naruto when I was a kid. However, had I known that it would be useful in death, I would have! And I’m certainly regretting it now!

 

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A definite AU for Naruto. I’m going to remove some parts and add some others for the sake of plot holes(so if something doesn't seem quite right it's probably intended... maybe), but I’ll try to stick to as close to how the Naruto-verse works. Also, say goodbye to canon!

 

Also, disclaimer, I do not own Naruto as that belongs solely to Kishimoto. I do, however, own this story.

 

Source for the pictures(as in I can't draw that well and they are not mine): Kurama:http://orig10.deviantart.net/2baa/f/2013/258/2/e/pup_kurama__nine_tailed_fox___naruto__by_dennismennis13-d6mfjuu.png

Naruto:https://www.deviantart.com/byhatakekakashi/art/naruto-chibi-327169893

 

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Jangofet54
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Better than most of the stories I read on this site, really enjoying it so far so here's to more chapters 

OxenThunder
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A Truly Good Naruto Fanfiction

Keep up the goodwork please! Having started my fiction reading from naruto fanfic, and reading 100s, this is by far in the top in terms of quality and idea.

StoneyKaroney
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As far as Naruto fanfictions go, this one is above average. The characters are interesting in their own right, not just copies of the manga characters. Naruto's moral code is a little wonky. I think the author needs to decide if Naruto is going to be ruthless or not and stop flip flopping on it. 

 

Dwight Schrute's review is wrong. The gay thing was a joke between the two characters. Naruto thought they were gay, but they aren't. It is pretty obvious if you have any reading experience whatsoever...

Naril
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I have really been enjoying this one so far, although I'm not too far in yet. Main character's perspecitive is very entertaining. Very few grammar issues, which is a big point for me. Especially in fanfiction. There have been some Naruto fanfictions which were entertaining but had very painful grammar. This one does not have that issue.

I really like the idea of the main character in a reincarnation Naruto universe having only a very vague idea of the setting instead of a an encyclopedic knowledge of each nuance(EDIT) (It's not quite that but eh, still like it.)

Keep it up Writer! Thank you for posting your work here.

LittleSettler
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Morbid and brutal at times, yet tastefully done.

This is the first fanfiction I've been interested enough to read, but from what I've heard, they don't tend to be consistent with the original. This one is.

The MC has imperfect observations and incomplete knowledge. Its the right mix of thoughts, actions and observations. Easy reading. The tone of the story is consistently a bit dark. It progresses perhaps too quickly... it would be nice to see more slice of life. The style suits the story although there's nothing special about it.

The MC takes a few nice parts from naruto's personality and blends it into a rough, almost brutal but protective kind of guy. He's not an idiot, but he also loses some of that unpredictable charm. His actions are both emotional and logical. He changes over time. The only hitch is that he's so young its hard to make sense of him at times.

The story seems quite deep. There are always things happening beyond the awareness of naruto and whoever's with him.

I don't remember any significant hitches from grammer, spelling, etc.

I've nocked down character because the dialogue almost all sounds like it comes from the same mouth. This is both in the wording and in how talkative they can be at times, when it doesn't really fit their character (kakashi, itachi...).

Yet these characters are much deeper than their dialogue. They act from their own motivations, using the incomplete knowledge that they have.

Its 27 chapters now and I get the sense its going to change and develop if it goes on for all that long. I'm excited to see how it does. 

Dwight Schrute
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Was interesting and fairly well written at first, however it's hard to understand what is happening and why later on. One second people are fighting to the death and then the next everyone forgets and becomes best friends. The last chapter at this point in time, naruto and complications, is extremely confusing. I don't want to spoil anything, but there is not one thing that makes sense in the entire chapter. All of this is fairly normal for quick fanfics, and I don't particularly dislike this, as I just enjoy reading new stories. However now the writer is just ruining the story with some SJW logic by making Kakashi gay. It's not realistic for the setting, and it's not true to the story either, as we know for a fact that Kakashi likes women. Being bi would be even less realistic. I just don't see the point in adding it in, when everything else is trying to be fairly accurate to the main story as far as I can remember. It's needless, random, and just screams SJW for some reason. Now that I know the author is going to be putting in things like this to the story, I don't feel continuing the story will be interesting. If this made some kind of sense or had some logic, it wouldn't be so annoying. It just feels like those tv shows that add in a random gay friend because they feel it's necessary for them to check that box for whatever reason. 

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