Within order is chaos – my world

Within order is chaos – my world

by Niel Zekkermesh

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 Once upon a gigantic mass of earth is a large crack that separates the eastern and western part of the world. Many acknowledged this as a wonder brought by the gods.

Indeed a wonder.

"... It's more of a mistake though?"

"D*mn it, I knew that choosing Helie's doodle was wrong!"

"Hey! It was perfectly fine until Role messed up!"

 

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Niel Zekkermesh

Niel Zekkermesh

Mikkenzzi

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