Grand Magus

by quebooks

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead Magic Male Lead Reincarnation Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

 

Transmigrated into another World ____ now has to live as the son of a duke, Fraser Rosethorn. Who was on the way on learning magic. Follow his journey as ____ has brought an AI into the mix. What will become of Fraser Rosethorn, will he ascend in the world of Magus or will he just become another cold corpse in the world? 
Find out on Grand Magus Tv. 

 

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Author Note:

Hi guys, I will write try to write one chapter per day just like I will upload one video on my youtube channel every single day. I am not an English native speaker so if you criticize my grammar then please correct at least one of my sentences. That will (I hope) enable me to get used to the correct grammar and thus improve my writing.

 

Sites where my novels can be found: 

Webnovel on the Username: Vajira
Royalroad on the Username: quebooks 

My own site is in progression and i will soon try to update it. 

If you've read this far then i wish you a wonderful day/week/month/year/ or a wonderful life depending on if you ever visit this site again. 

"I am a somebody with a name that shall be part of your world and with my written words i will feed your imagination and thus enrichen your life" ~ Quote by UniqueBooks

Edit: 

Visit my Social Media accounts, as I am not allowed to put my links in here visit them! Also, the Cover is a license-free picture from unplush which doesn't need crediting but here is the Photographer: 

Mervyn, someone from Hongkong, follow his youtube and Instagram channel. 
Also while you are at it visit my youtube channel and my Instagram/Twitter Account.

 

 

 

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1 Transmigration ago
Chapter 2 Wildlands ago
Chapter 3 Wildland Border City ago
Chapter 4 Crossing the Wildlands ago
Chapter 5 Data ago
Chapter 6 Magic ago
Chapter 7 Border City ago
Chapter 8 Departing to the Howling Abyss ago
Chapter 9 Arriving at the Howling Abyss Academy ago
Chapter 10 Basic Meditation Technique ago
Chapter 11 Mentor Sept ago
Chapter 12 Alchemy Set ago
Chapter 13 Basic Explosion Potion (1) ago
Chapter 14 Basic Explosion Potion (2) ago
Chapter 15 Senior Apprentices ago
Chapter 16 Selling a Potion (1) ago
Chapter 17 Selling a Potion (2) ago
Chapter 18 Spell Model (1) ago
Chapter 19 Spell Model (2) ago
Chapter 20 Spell Model (3) ago
Chapter 21 Simulation ago
Chapter 22 New Function ago
Chapter 23 Overall Improvement ago
Chapter 24 Masked Figure ago
Chapter 25 Duty of Magus Sept ago
Chapter 26 Preparation ago
Chapter 27 Arriving at the Outpost ago
Chapter 28 Uneasy Feeling ago
Chapter 29 Modified Spell Model ago
Chapter 30 Frasers Alchemy Theory ago
Chapter 31 Experimenting with dark rope ago
Chapter 32 Second Spell Model ago
Chapter 33 Method of Control ago
Chapter 34 Trading Potions ago
Chapter 35 Baby Bat ago
Chapter 36 Spirit Technique ago
Chapter 37 Experimentation ago
Chapter 38 Parasitic Insect ago
Chapter 39 A New Beginning ago
Chapter 40 Innate Spell ago
Chapter 41 Silence before the storm ago
Chapter 42 Entering a Tide ago
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Jakylorhide
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Well done reskin of other works

Has the exact same plot and abilities from "The wizard world" and "Warlock of the Mages world" with a dark attribute alchemist with-

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

Koriel
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Lack of Heart, a Copy that knows it's a Copy

I really enjoyed Warlock of the Magus world and the wizard world, so a copy sounds great. However I feel this is copying without adding it own soul into it.  It is going through the motions of a story I already read without its own heart.  

For example, the chapters where he wakes up, takes the trip to the testing, is tested and then is chosen.  His AI chip is given a short explanation of "Where my powerup" -> "Immediately feel comfortable and use the powerup" and isn't a clearly outlined "I had this AI chip installed in my brain, and for some reason it merged with my soul in some fashion" like in the work it's copying.  The lack of heart continues from just the initial chapter.  Going through the motions, carriage attacked by animals, MC realizes animals will break through, people die he contributes.  Show up for testing, quickly tested as dark element and ASAP goes to join dark school.   Its not the speed thats the problem, its just that I can feel the author going through the motions, he already read it, I already read it, so he can just hand wave through it.  

Read the difference between the first part of the story and when the MC is experimenting with the dark rope spell. I believe this is not copied, at least from memory. When the author invents it, he wants to explain the spell and so it has heart.  Him being skilled in alchemy is a given from the previous works, so that is semi-hand waved.

I really like the works this story is copying from, even though they are pretty much copies of each other already.   I feel like the author needed to put a twist on the story in some way to force himself to inject heart into the story. 

For example, I don't think he will. But lets imagine the author wants this guy to also have a snake bloodline like in one of the two stories it's pulling from.  He's read in the other story about purifiying them using AI and having a bloodline and warlocks and whatnot, I've read it too.    So he might kinda just go through the motions quickly.

Im hopeful going forward and I'll continue to read it, but I think it would have been better if it strayed farther from the sources or put more care into copying.   I'd love a copy of those stories, but I don't want to read a copy that knows it's a copy. 

The Spectator
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Beginning is a reskin of warlock of the magus world, but changes a few things. The story is a enjoyable read and a few edits can make the story shine. As of now at chp 20, it is too early to see where this'll go.

Rate: 3.7

DaruneAlbane
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like it but not yet original

Am up to chap 38 story has borrowed heavely from magus but it looks like THIS could be the main split of the story where auther gets original .. only time will tell

v01cano
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Very nice. Recommend it for anyone. Nice plot, story and it's got good potential the way it's going