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20 years have passed since the Chaos Energy Quake rippled through the Milky Way Galaxy. During the year-long Quake, Chaos Energy became unusable, rendering much of the galaxy’s technology useless, and preventing Chaotics – beings who possess supernatural abilities – from using their powers. The galaxy has since moved on from the Quake, but to this day no one knows what could have caused it. The only broadly possible hints lie with the woefully few Chaotics born during the Quake, such as the seven Chaotics born on the world of Nimalia, homeworld of the Nimalian Territories. The other galactic civilizations see little correlation between the Quake and those born during it, but now that the seven have reached the age of 20, some Nimalians think they may be able to finally learn exactly what caused the galactic disruption two decades ago…

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Matathias

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I Am Ascending (IV)
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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
1 - Formation ago
2 - The Electrotechnic's Connection ago
3 - Start of Unknown: Infection ago
4 - Chaotic Introduction ago
5 - Until Dusk ago
6 - Bleeding Rage ago
7 - Technically Chaos ago
8 - Sunova's Mystery ago
9 - Master Genesis ago
10 - Surprising Discoveries ago
11 - Metallic Raid ago
12 - Add to Unknown: Creatures ago
13 - Sunova's Response ago
14 - Fleeing Chaos ago
15 - Master Advice ago
16 - Major Fifth ago
17 - Hazardous Material ago
18 - The Chaos of Infection ago
19 - Disinfection Chaos ago
20 - Rising Importance ago
21 - A New Lead ago
22 - Convenient Vacancy ago
23 - Deserted Discovery ago
24 - The Next Level ago
25 - Filling the Blanks ago
26 - Negated Chaos ago
27 - Developments ago
28 - The Best and Worst of Friends ago
29 - Chaos' Influence ago
30 - The Tendency of Power ago
31 - Breakdown ago
32 - Retrieval ago
33 - Metallic Chaos ago
34 - The First of Many ago
35 - Resolutions ago
36 - Meaning(less) Action ago
37 - Furthered Unknown: Revelation ago
38 - Splitting Conflicts ago
39 - One Step Forward ago
40 - Light of the Unknown ago
41 - Action! ago
42 - The Answer ago
43 - Unexpected Alternatives ago
44 - Crushing Escape ago
45 - Arrival ago
46 - Exdomination ago
47 - Surdeus Ex Machina ago
48 - Chaos ago
49 - Reveal of Known: Nanocreatures ago
50 ago
51 - End of the Line ago
52 - Blind Faith ago
53 - Innocence Lost ago
54 - The New Guys ago
55 - Protector of the Past ago
56 - The Power of Greed ago
57 - Guardian of the Future ago
58 - The Power of Chaos ago
59 - Darkness of the Known ago
60 - Capital of the Galaxy ago
61 - Breakthrough ago
62 - Beachhead ago
63 - Return to Chaos ago
64 - Plans for Loss ago
65 - False Known: Undeath ago
66 - Tenth Hour ago
67 - Retaliation Chaos ago
68 - Calm Before the Storm ago
69 - The Rules of Chaos ago
70 - Eleventh Hour ago
71 - Ultimate Chaos ago
72 - After the Fall ago
73 - Return to Known: Apocalypse ago
74 - Urban Warfare ago
75 - The Powers That Be ago
76 - Release From Known: Return ago
77 - Corrupting Chaos ago
78 - Prior Knowledge ago
79 - Final Relief ago
80 - Final Hour ago
81 - Final Rush ago
82 - Final Threat ago
83 - Final Chaos ago
84 - Final End of Known: Harbinger ago
85 - A Prologue's End ago
END - Epilogue: The Beginning of a Saga ago
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ILovePancakes
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The story was to the point and not drawn out yet still stay consistent throughout. Character interactions are quite realistic, though cliches are still present, especially on the antagonists. Seriously, a few of them monologuing is reasonable, but all the big sticks do? I doubt it.

Could have gathered more readers if you spaced the releases out instead of dumping the entire 1000+ pages in a month though.

Overall worth the time spent reading, thank you for your great work!

Mandez
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Enjoying the storie so far, keep up the good work!