Rise
by Matathias
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20 years have passed since the Chaos Energy Quake rippled through the Milky Way Galaxy. During the year-long Quake, Chaos Energy became unusable, rendering much of the galaxy’s technology useless, and preventing Chaotics – beings who possess supernatural abilities – from using their powers. The galaxy has since moved on from the Quake, but to this day no one knows what could have caused it. The only broadly possible hints lie with the woefully few Chaotics born during the Quake, such as the seven Chaotics born on the world of Nimalia, homeworld of the Nimalian Territories. The other galactic civilizations see little correlation between the Quake and those born during it, but now that the seven have reached the age of 20, some Nimalians think they may be able to finally learn exactly what caused the galactic disruption two decades ago…
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Great read
The story was to the point and not drawn out yet still stay consistent throughout. Character interactions are quite realistic, though cliches are still present, especially on the antagonists. Seriously, a few of them monologuing is reasonable, but all the big sticks do? I doubt it.
Could have gathered more readers if you spaced the releases out instead of dumping the entire 1000+ pages in a month though.
Overall worth the time spent reading, thank you for your great work!