Reaper of the Martial World

by Awespec

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Mystery Romance Harem Male Lead Martial Arts Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural Wuxia
Warning This fiction contains:
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"You're too arrogant."

To Dyon, it seemed as though these words were heard all the time.

However, how could these people possibly know of all his hard work? Of the fact that sleep was but a distant relative of his. How could they know that he never had a single moment to rest.

And yet, despite their ignorance, they still said, "you're too arrogant..."

But where were those people when a five-year-old Dyon's eyes shone looking at a computer screen filled with code? Where were those people when an eight-year-old Dyon played his piano and plucked his guitar strings until his fingers bled... needing to vent his feelings about his lost mother without bothering his fatigued father? Where were those people when Dyon sat alone at ten-years-old… when his parents were gone, and the only thing left was a room filled with inventions and computers?

Dyon's arrogance wasn't borne of thin air. It was his hard work. It was his shield. And he wasn't willing to give it up...

Now alone, he left his home behind.

He was no longer the boy genius who changed the human mortal realm. He was now nothing but a commoner, a bug noble families saw fit to step on. An insignificant existence.

And yet, Dyon was still the same unchanging person. Standing tall, his eyes firm and his will indomitable.

This so-called Martial World would come to understand the meaning behind his existence...

 

**Excerpt**
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"You're quite bold for a girl who's almost been recluse for her whole life you know," Dyon said chuckling.

"Little sister Delia and Meiying probably think so too, but you've been in my heart since the opening ceremony. Maybe not exactly in this way… But sometimes a foot in the door for a long time leads to a fully open one, no?"

Dyon smiled, 'it seems like she's been watching from afar for a long time… it must be lonely being in that room with Libro all the time.'

Dyon felt a delicate hand playing with his collar, "the truth is that I'm always playing the gentle big sister role, mostly because I have no idea how much longer I'll have the chance to…"

The vulnerability in her voice made Dyon tremble. Madeleine was so strong, yet it seemed even martial artists had their weaknesses too.

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RMW happens to be the very first novel I've ever written. I have to admit that the first volume requires a lot of work. However, from the second volume onward I am confident in saying that it becomes a ride just as enjoyable as some of the best wuxia novels available. If you happen to read that far, and disagree, feel free to join our discord and call me an idiot for wasting your time, LMAO. I hope you guys stick it out to the end <3


3-4 chapters a day, everyday.

***this story has NO NTR. Nor will it ever have NTR... ***
***I've begun posting pictures of what some characters of Focus look like on my twitter. So, check out @Awespec if you're interested***

 

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***this story of mine has also been uploaded to webnovel as well (in the description of webnovel (at the end), there is proof of this).

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Chapter Name Release Date
The Naked Boy ago
Delia ago
Fooled? ago
The Library ago
The Opening Ceremony ago
Domineering ago
Splash ago
Heads Meet ago
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What an Idiot ago
Ava ago
What it Means to be a Genius ago
Heaven's Chimes ago
Savior ago
Madeleine ago
Goddess' Disposition ago
Bet ago
The Banquet ago
Femme Fatale ago
... ago
The Celestial Woman ago
Rallying ago
Central Pillar Opening ago
A Brewing Storm ago
Rage ago
The Wedding ago
Celestial Deer Sect Successor ago
Behind the Scenes (1) ago
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Shuu
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Addicting and paced perfectly

a classic royalroad epic of tales of a domineering personality taking a unjust world by storm. He’s my favorite kind of mc personality a cocky sarcastic jokester who can more then backup his mouth. Definitly check this out, just be prepared to lose some sleep.

Rabid Fan
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A passable story that is worth reading

I enjoyed some portions of this story.

First the good

  • The Worldbuilding is done slowly 
  • Awespec has used english rather than engrish
  • Straight forward story telling

Now for the bad

  • end notes that can make you vomit
  • So many cliches 
  • Drawn out sex scenes 

I feel this books interesting and worth time if you have lots to spare.

 

Paradoxcloud
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Basically a standard wuxia/xianxia

If you've ever read a wuxia novel then this book won't suprise you in any way. It has relatively unique concepts but they are explained in such a vague way that whenever something new happens you just have to say ''ok, that's a thing now."

The mc's motivations for doing the things that he does are quite odd, the mc will often times attach himself to random characters for no good reason other than for plot progression. The dialogues feel rather dull whenever generic evil person number 2835 starts monologing about how the mc shall be killed/face his doom/face their wrath/etc.. Subsequently failing and then being  slapped in the face by the Mc's gigantic co...powers.

The world building is quite generic as it does the same thing that every other wuxia novel does. 

 

The grammar's fine but could use some cleanup.

Domini
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Character progression has some issues

I think the best phrase that embodies how I feel about this story is "the devil is in the details".

Unfortunantly, many details are left out of the earlier part of the story and are referenced, but not explained in enough detail to give the reader any type of real understanding of how events unfolded to bring the MC to where he is at the start of the story. Some of the apparent side characters are more fleshed out than the MC.

I would say the story in and of itself is entertaining and worth a read. I enjoy the main plot line and the style is not terrible. I ran across many grammer errors that could use correcting though. These problably stem from a lack of editorial review or availability of a proof reader.

My lowest score rated was for character. Because throughout the entire primary part of the story the MC's reflections of the past are simply not used effectively enough to expand on who the MC is as a person. This is corrected in later chapters somewhat decently, however for me the story progression at that point had completely overshadowed the MC.

Will I keep reading? Yes

Do I think the writting has improved over time? Yes.

FatMenBeTrippin1
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Ok so I just hit chapter 347 and honestly I had to drop it. There are only a few things that really turn me off with a novel but in recent chapters it hit one of them, especially since Awespec said that the female chars wouldn’t be damsels in distress. 

The story up till that point had been really well crafted, the cultivation was different and nice and the romance was half decent.

 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

Kensai
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Done. 

Found I didn't care about the characters anymore, their struggles, their world, their universes. 

Got way too elaborate explaining the minor derivatives of power.  One moment the protagonist is at the top of the Universal Rankings, then a few chapters later, he can't compete/compare to any others in the Top Ten. 

The story had a decent beginning, it was leading somewhere.  Now it has no real direction or purpose.  Not feeling it any longer.

Nina Huffman
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 Really good book and the author is very good at making the book. Hr made me think that the summary was the first chapter.

Avo
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Shameless wish fulfilment

Litterally starts with the world bending around the mc so they can do something impossible, and only continues to get worse from there. The mc is an obnoxious snob, who will not shut up. The setting is a cookie cutter magic school with cookie cutter xanxia clans. Overall I could not stomach more than 7 chapters of this BS.

Conan Whalen-McKain
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The purpose of a story is for a character to be challenged. For there to be some sense of risk. The main character is beyond OP. He takes on offhand comment and a couple hours of reading to become the strongest chatacter in the story. When he is beat up sacrificing for another you know its just because the beating will make him stronger. There is no risk and only fantasy fulfillment. So the story becomes very boring.

caby202
  • Overall Score

Got fuck I regret even trying it

Holy crap this was boring and stupid. Like its just so oooh power fantasy self insert blah blah blah. 

Go somewhere else if you want a story.