Reaper of the Martial World

by Awespec

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Mystery Romance Harem Male Lead Martial Arts Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural Wuxia
Warning This fiction contains:
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"You're too arrogant."

To Dyon, it seemed as though these words were heard all the time.

However, how could these people possibly know of all his hard work? Of the fact that sleep was but a distant relative of his. How could they know that he never had a single moment to rest.

And yet, despite their ignorance, they still said, "you're too arrogant..."

But where were those people when a five-year-old Dyon's eyes shone looking at a computer screen filled with code? Where were those people when an eight-year-old Dyon played his piano and plucked his guitar strings until his fingers bled... needing to vent his feelings about his lost mother without bothering his fatigued father? Where were those people when Dyon sat alone at ten-years-old… when his parents were gone, and the only thing left was a room filled with inventions and computers?

Dyon's arrogance wasn't borne of thin air. It was his hard work. It was his shield. And he wasn't willing to give it up...

Now alone, he left his home behind.

He was no longer the boy genius who changed the human mortal realm. He was now nothing but a commoner, a bug noble families saw fit to step on. An insignificant existence.

And yet, Dyon was still the same unchanging person. Standing tall, his eyes firm and his will indomitable.

This so-called Martial World would come to understand the meaning behind his existence...

 

**Excerpt**
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"You're quite bold for a girl who's almost been recluse for her whole life you know," Dyon said chuckling.

"Little sister Delia and Meiying probably think so too, but you've been in my heart since the opening ceremony. Maybe not exactly in this way… But sometimes a foot in the door for a long time leads to a fully open one, no?"

Dyon smiled, 'it seems like she's been watching from afar for a long time… it must be lonely being in that room with Libro all the time.'

Dyon felt a delicate hand playing with his collar, "the truth is that I'm always playing the gentle big sister role, mostly because I have no idea how much longer I'll have the chance to…"

The vulnerability in her voice made Dyon tremble. Madeleine was so strong, yet it seemed even martial artists had their weaknesses too.

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RMW happens to be the very first novel I've ever written. I have to admit that the first volume requires a lot of work. However, from the second volume onward I am confident in saying that it becomes a ride just as enjoyable as some of the best wuxia novels available. If you happen to read that far, and disagree, feel free to join our discord and call me an idiot for wasting your time, LMAO. I hope you guys stick it out to the end <3


3-4 chapters a day, everyday.

***this story has NO NTR. Nor will it ever have NTR... ***
***I've begun posting pictures of what some characters of Focus look like on my twitter. So, check out @Awespec if you're interested***

 

 https://discord.gg/G3ME8z2

***this story of mine has also been uploaded to webnovel as well (in the description of webnovel (at the end), there is proof of this).

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The Naked Boy ago
Delia ago
Fooled? ago
The Library ago
The Opening Ceremony ago
Domineering ago
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Heads Meet ago
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What an Idiot ago
Ava ago
What it Means to be a Genius ago
Heaven's Chimes ago
Savior ago
Madeleine ago
Goddess' Disposition ago
Bet ago
The Banquet ago
Femme Fatale ago
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The Celestial Woman ago
Rallying ago
Central Pillar Opening ago
A Brewing Storm ago
Rage ago
The Wedding ago
Celestial Deer Sect Successor ago
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Void Wanderer
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Most wuxia novels center around a character who is reborn from an insanely op god and his rise to the top as he has no one out there who holds a candle to his brain, but in this story, it brings something unique and entertaining to the table. We all know that humans from the mortal realm are inferior beings and yet Dyon here is defying all logic and is supremely overpowering every other character at their own game. Why is he op? A reason being that he comes from the mortal world and that humans are always curious about the unknown further developing their brain, which he then brings this new profound curiousness into a higher plane. What makes me like the story is how he got insanely op, not through the cultivation pills increasing his cultivation or relying solely on a technique that is saint-grade. His hunger for power and knowledge leads him to explore the unheard of and delving deep into things such as arrays and pills which no one pays attention to. Even if they did would they get half as much? No, reason being is that their mind has come to accept the world be it bland or complex instead of questioning it. Or another reason being is probably that they cannot comprehend as fast as Dyon, which is acceptable. After all, how could Dyon come into this world without having at least some sort of skill? It wouldn't be an understatement saying Dyon is the best the mortal realm could offer. The only thing that I think conflicts with all of this is that Dyon being as young as he is, but yet again this story seems like it's from the future so it's debatable whether or not that humanity has at least grown from all the years that have past.

Maybe I am a bit bias because I love op characters and romance plots, but more mainly of how plain wuxia novels can get and how they get really repetitive. Considering all of wuxia is based on a reincarnated character, this is a huge change for me and honestly, I'm glad that this isn't the case. Even if it does, it won't change the fact that this story has got me on an irreplaceable ride. If I had to compare this novel, I would compare it to Ancient Godly Monarch or God of Slaughter. (Although I'm not even near the end of GoS)

There are probably more flaws into this story than what I can see, but by all means, do point it out for me as I would like to gain insights and understandings because I am learning.

Calavente
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make the effort to read at least 20 chapters...

That's all there is to say.

it then became one of my favorited novels here.

but I agree that the 20 (or 50?) early chapters seems a bit cringy or wish-fullfillement... until it makes sense, and that you understand more the lore, the world, and why he behaves like that.

 

take my cue on that: 

the early behavior of the MC is because he comes from the mortal world, and did there so many impossible things that he reacts as any 13yo reacts when having encountered heavy success... 

and he can do that... why ? because spoiler... 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

caby202
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Got fuck I regret even trying it

Reviewed at: ...

Holy crap this was boring and stupid. Like its just so oooh power fantasy self insert blah blah blah. 

Go somewhere else if you want a story.

Kensai
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Done. 

Found I didn't care about the characters anymore, their struggles, their world, their universes. 

Got way too elaborate explaining the minor derivatives of power.  One moment the protagonist is at the top of the Universal Rankings, then a few chapters later, he can't compete/compare to any others in the Top Ten. 

The story had a decent beginning, it was leading somewhere.  Now it has no real direction or purpose.  Not feeling it any longer.

Agp05
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This story is perfect if you wish to be entertained. It’ll suck you straight in. 

OxenThunder
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Mary Sue Doesn't Care About You (Unless Your Hot)

Has anyone read King of Gods light novel before? This is a similiar type of story, all the way down to it reading like a translation. 

Plot Summed Up: Walk into random situation, Using amazing smarts to win, get beat up, train, kill person who beat me up, repeat (throw in randomly building an orphanage or hitting on women every while or so)

The character has no motivation other than self pleasure. He does acts of kindess to make himself to feel good, he disrespects culture because he knows he's better than them, he had a master for 4 minutes and now he knows he won't need another, and he hits on everything.

 

TL;DR: Story about hollow Mary Sue Person

Avo
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Shameless wish fulfilment

Litterally starts with the world bending around the mc so they can do something impossible, and only continues to get worse from there. The mc is an obnoxious snob, who will not shut up. The setting is a cookie cutter magic school with cookie cutter xanxia clans. Overall I could not stomach more than 7 chapters of this BS.

camperbee
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last half star for when the stories finished

Love the story

just a great xianxia, but with a great personal spin by the author

his implementing of his own ideas (great ideas btw) on the normal xianxia take are really hooking me here

i love the fan service with his twitter and patreon (see author note chapter: Elvin Tomes (3) (227))

i‘m not a fan of harems but the one hes got going till now is nice

the two wifes feel important to the mc and the plot

emotions are fleshed out and the story has depth

i like this novel and the author so much rn that i joined the 10$ (the benefits also played a part xd)

thx mr author

kao
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RAW LARGE Diamond. Just needs Polishing.

A good story. Good good. 

The only reason I gave such a midiocre grammar score is due to the many, oh so many dialogue issues of no capitals when starting a dialogue : 

 

he said, "i don't wanna do that." (Capital needed on that I)

she said, "why you lookin' at me funny?" (Capital needed on that Why)

they all said, "we don't think your kind is wanted here." (Capital needed on that We) 

 

If you can ignore that issue with lack of caps on dialogue like that, then you should be golden. The overall story, characters, world building is very entertaining. I actually got so grabbed by the story, I stayed up way too late over the weekend reading it. 

 

Give it a shot. Just...be aware the damage of the lack of caps on dialogue, "i warned you. Don't cry if you see this happen alot." 

Author, I love you. Ok. Maybe NOT that way, but you know what I mean....

 

 

stetyson
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Funny. Attention sucking. Great writing. Good pace too. Keep it up!