Reaper of the Martial World

by Awespec

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Mystery Romance Harem Male Lead Martial Arts Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural Wuxia
Warning This fiction contains:
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"You're too arrogant."

To Dyon, it seemed as though these words were heard all the time.

However, how could these people possibly know of all his hard work? Of the fact that sleep was but a distant relative of his. How could they know that he never had a single moment to rest.

And yet, despite their ignorance, they still said, "you're too arrogant..."

But where were those people when a five-year-old Dyon's eyes shone looking at a computer screen filled with code? Where were those people when an eight-year-old Dyon played his piano and plucked his guitar strings until his fingers bled... needing to vent his feelings about his lost mother without bothering his fatigued father? Where were those people when Dyon sat alone at ten-years-old… when his parents were gone, and the only thing left was a room filled with inventions and computers?

Dyon's arrogance wasn't borne of thin air. It was his hard work. It was his shield. And he wasn't willing to give it up...

Now alone, he left his home behind.

He was no longer the boy genius who changed the human mortal realm. He was now nothing but a commoner, a bug noble families saw fit to step on. An insignificant existence.

And yet, Dyon was still the same unchanging person. Standing tall, his eyes firm and his will indomitable.

This so-called Martial World would come to understand the meaning behind his existence...

 

**Excerpt**
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"You're quite bold for a girl who's almost been recluse for her whole life you know," Dyon said chuckling.

"Little sister Delia and Meiying probably think so too, but you've been in my heart since the opening ceremony. Maybe not exactly in this way… But sometimes a foot in the door for a long time leads to a fully open one, no?"

Dyon smiled, 'it seems like she's been watching from afar for a long time… it must be lonely being in that room with Libro all the time.'

Dyon felt a delicate hand playing with his collar, "the truth is that I'm always playing the gentle big sister role, mostly because I have no idea how much longer I'll have the chance to…"

The vulnerability in her voice made Dyon tremble. Madeleine was so strong, yet it seemed even martial artists had their weaknesses too.

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RMW happens to be the very first novel I've ever written. I have to admit that the first volume requires a lot of work. However, from the second volume onward I am confident in saying that it becomes a ride just as enjoyable as some of the best wuxia novels available. If you happen to read that far, and disagree, feel free to join our discord and call me an idiot for wasting your time, LMAO. I hope you guys stick it out to the end <3


3-4 chapters a day, everyday.

***this story has NO NTR. Nor will it ever have NTR... ***
***I've begun posting pictures of what some characters of Focus look like on my twitter. So, check out @Awespec if you're interested***

 

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***this story of mine has also been uploaded to webnovel as well (in the description of webnovel (at the end), there is proof of this).

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Chapter Name Release Date
The Naked Boy ago
Delia ago
Fooled? ago
The Library ago
The Opening Ceremony ago
Domineering ago
Splash ago
Heads Meet ago
FUCK ago
What an Idiot ago
Ava ago
What it Means to be a Genius ago
Heaven's Chimes ago
Savior ago
Madeleine ago
Goddess' Disposition ago
Bet ago
The Banquet ago
Femme Fatale ago
... ago
The Celestial Woman ago
Rallying ago
Central Pillar Opening ago
A Brewing Storm ago
Rage ago
The Wedding ago
Celestial Deer Sect Successor ago
Behind the Scenes (1) ago
Behind the Scenes (2) ago
Behind the Scenes (3) ago
Entertainment (1) ago
Entertainment (2) ago
Entertainment (3) ago
God Clan Young Masters (1) ago
God Clan Young Masters (2) ago
God Clan Young Masters (3) ago
Forever and Always (1) ago
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Talk in the Clouds (1) ago
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You Must Survive (1) ago
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You Must Survive (4) ago
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moira
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This story isn't for everyone. If you don't like it from the start, meaning first ten or so chapters, you probably won't like the story at all. Because, you know, it's this kind of story for people who want this kind of story. Ridiculously OP character who is behaving this particular way. Who can steamroll his enemies without much problem. Have hell of a (improbable) good luck and probably will have. The kind of story which you go into so you can have fun, watch crazy scenes and cheer for MC with nearly total assurance of him getting through the shit and smell after flowers afterward.

So, please. If you don't like the story, go away. It's not the right story for you. And being brat about it is hurting the author. You know, the person who is working hard for it and probably love it and just want to make other people having some good time. It's hard, making something nice. Try write some good shit, sorry for my French, and maybe after that you can tear into another person.

With this off from my chest, I am overall happy with the story.

I like the way the author create the atmosphere in it. You can pretty easily paint the image in your head if you are the kind of person. Some of Awespec's scenes are just so alive, work with the story in a way which really grabs your attention and makes great visuals. I like author's crazy imagination. It's hard to write in a way that doesn't bore quickly and Awespec is making good job so far.

There are few aspects that are irritating me - the thing with beaty, sometimes too easy way the MC has it, the stupidity of some characters (if not all of them in moments). But all in all, it's solid story.

4* in reality, but I'll give it full. You probably know why.

EagleFire
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Written at Ch.315

Let's just get right into this.

The writing style makes me think it's an amateur chinese translation with all the overly detailed paragraphs that, more often than not, repeat things to the nth degree and treat the readers like five-year-olds that can't remember what happened ten minutes ago. Can't remember how overpowered the mc is compared to everyone around him? No worries, almost other every other chapter that involves the mc and an opponent will go into excrutiating detail about that very fact.

The mc is the average cookie-cutter Gary Stue that manages to get himself out of any situation so there's no sense of panic or trepidation, stress or even worry. He advances in all fields faster than anyone else in the story, steps on everyone he meets that he doesn't immediately take a liking to and pretty much ignores everyone stronger than him. Can't say I blame him since the combination of his plot armor and the fact that everyone else, that don't play a pivotal role in the story, are complete idiots anyway, so there's nothing really for him, and readers, to worry about.

The characters' personalities are flatter than a tsundere's chest and about as 2D as that snake game you used to play on your phone as a kid (90s kids will know what I'm talking about)

This is about as anime and cliche as you can get in a story so if you like that kind of thing, then this is right up your alley.

But hey, the fighting scenes aren't half bad and the grammar isn't very cringe-worthy so there's that at least?

NakedFury
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Cringy, Cheesy, and overall horrible

The main character is a walking talking cringy and cheesy child that is so overpowered he has visible plot armor.

 

I lasted 7 chapters before I could not read anymore but you may last a couple more, but expect ridiculous dialogue from children, a cheesy and cringy main character.

Yoyo53552
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I’m always awaiting the next chapter like a hawk. Constantly refreshing my page waiting for the next few chapters. Fantastic story, I’m instantly captivated. Some parts of the story seem to drag on for ages but those are very rare. So far love it

OxenThunder
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Mary Sue Doesn't Care About You (Unless Your Hot)

Has anyone read King of Gods light novel before? This is a similiar type of story, all the way down to it reading like a translation. 

Plot Summed Up: Walk into random situation, Using amazing smarts to win, get beat up, train, kill person who beat me up, repeat (throw in randomly building an orphanage or hitting on women every while or so)

The character has no motivation other than self pleasure. He does acts of kindess to make himself to feel good, he disrespects culture because he knows he's better than them, he had a master for 4 minutes and now he knows he won't need another, and he hits on everything.

 

TL;DR: Story about hollow Mary Sue Person

Wolven
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Fun read but not ground breaking

It's not the most intuitive story but it is a fun read that gets much better and more complex as you go on.

Though my biggest gripe with the story is the age of the main characters, they all read like they are 20+ not 13-17 year olds (especially when it comes to explicit scenes).

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Quick review (haven’t read that far yet)

At first as I was beginning to read this book it gave an interesting feel to it. Naked Mc and slightly OP and tall AF at 1.8 as a 13 yr old. He is different compared to other mcs as he has the balls to flirt compared to other mcs.

Albeit their was some details left out that left many readers confused. And some other concepts that could help improve such as the so called “will”. And the world building could include more things about where they are. 

For those wonder about the so called “NTR” that was mentioned by the author here is a little spoiler as it might mention some things about the chapter.

Spoiler: Spoiler

For those that are curious go to chapter “A brewing Storm” and scroll half way down to find the authors note in the chapter and he explains what happens. 

All in all the start of the novel is somewhat new compared to other novels and provides new areas on the dao or what is called “will” in the novel.

 

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A Great Example of Wuxia with OP MC

If you like OP MC wuxias and all the tropes that follow it, you'll really like this. 

If you don't... well, look somewhere else because this wasn't made for you.

If you get a cheeseburger, don't complain that it has cheese. Order something else.

 

The laws in the world are pretty unique and have good depth.

The characters are what you expect from most wuxia.

The grammar is great. Just the occasional typo.

Adelaide
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I made it to chapter 7

The worst sort of cringy wish-fulfillment. The MC is a cool kid not afraid of anything using modern thought and technology to upset the martial arts world. Watch him shamelessly flirt with preteen girls!

 

I've been told that it gets better in later chapters but I can't continue. Best of luck to the future.

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Best cultivation novel ever

Reviewed at: Second Trial (3)

I have read so so many cultivation novels. And belive me when I say they all feel the same stupid clichés which continue on through out the stories. But this book has just taken a aspect of this genre and taken it to much greater heights. I truly commend the author for his great skills