Reaper of the Martial World

by Awespec

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Mystery Romance Harem Male Lead Martial Arts Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural Wuxia
Warning This fiction contains:
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"You're too arrogant."

To Dyon, it seemed as though these words were heard all the time.

However, how could these people possibly know of all his hard work? Of the fact that sleep was but a distant relative of his. How could they know that he never had a single moment to rest.

And yet, despite their ignorance, they still said, "you're too arrogant..."

But where were those people when a five-year-old Dyon's eyes shone looking at a computer screen filled with code? Where were those people when an eight-year-old Dyon played his piano and plucked his guitar strings until his fingers bled... needing to vent his feelings about his lost mother without bothering his fatigued father? Where were those people when Dyon sat alone at ten-years-old… when his parents were gone, and the only thing left was a room filled with inventions and computers?

Dyon's arrogance wasn't borne of thin air. It was his hard work. It was his shield. And he wasn't willing to give it up...

Now alone, he left his home behind.

He was no longer the boy genius who changed the human mortal realm. He was now nothing but a commoner, a bug noble families saw fit to step on. An insignificant existence.

And yet, Dyon was still the same unchanging person. Standing tall, his eyes firm and his will indomitable.

This so-called Martial World would come to understand the meaning behind his existence...

 

**Excerpt**
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"You're quite bold for a girl who's almost been recluse for her whole life you know," Dyon said chuckling.

"Little sister Delia and Meiying probably think so too, but you've been in my heart since the opening ceremony. Maybe not exactly in this way… But sometimes a foot in the door for a long time leads to a fully open one, no?"

Dyon smiled, 'it seems like she's been watching from afar for a long time… it must be lonely being in that room with Libro all the time.'

Dyon felt a delicate hand playing with his collar, "the truth is that I'm always playing the gentle big sister role, mostly because I have no idea how much longer I'll have the chance to…"

The vulnerability in her voice made Dyon tremble. Madeleine was so strong, yet it seemed even martial artists had their weaknesses too.

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RMW happens to be the very first novel I've ever written. I have to admit that the first volume requires a lot of work. However, from the second volume onward I am confident in saying that it becomes a ride just as enjoyable as some of the best wuxia novels available. If you happen to read that far, and disagree, feel free to join our discord and call me an idiot for wasting your time, LMAO. I hope you guys stick it out to the end <3


3-4 chapters a day, everyday.

***this story has NO NTR. Nor will it ever have NTR... ***
***I've begun posting pictures of what some characters of Focus look like on my twitter. So, check out @Awespec if you're interested***

 

 https://discord.gg/G3ME8z2

***this story of mine has also been uploaded to webnovel as well (in the description of webnovel (at the end), there is proof of this).

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The Naked Boy ago
Delia ago
Fooled? ago
The Library ago
The Opening Ceremony ago
Domineering ago
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Heads Meet ago
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What an Idiot ago
Ava ago
What it Means to be a Genius ago
Heaven's Chimes ago
Savior ago
Madeleine ago
Goddess' Disposition ago
Bet ago
The Banquet ago
Femme Fatale ago
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The Celestial Woman ago
Rallying ago
Central Pillar Opening ago
A Brewing Storm ago
Rage ago
The Wedding ago
Celestial Deer Sect Successor ago
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NakedFury
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Cringy, Cheesy, and overall horrible

The main character is a walking talking cringy and cheesy child that is so overpowered he has visible plot armor.

 

I lasted 7 chapters before I could not read anymore but you may last a couple more, but expect ridiculous dialogue from children, a cheesy and cringy main character.

Paradoxcloud
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Basically a standard wuxia/xianxia

Reviewed at: God Clan Young Masters (1)

If you've ever read a wuxia novel then this book won't suprise you in any way. It has relatively unique concepts but they are explained in such a vague way that whenever something new happens you just have to say ''ok, that's a thing now."

The mc's motivations for doing the things that he does are quite odd, the mc will often times attach himself to random characters for no good reason other than for plot progression. The dialogues feel rather dull whenever generic evil person number 2835 starts monologuing about how the mc shall be killed/face his doom/face their wrath/etc.. Subsequently failing and then being  slapped in the face by the Mc's gigantic co...powers.

The world building is quite generic as it does the same thing that every other wuxia novel does. 

 

The grammar's fine but could use some cleanup.

Adelaide
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The worst sort of cringy wish-fulfillment. The MC is a cool kid not afraid of anything using modern thought and technology to upset the martial arts world. Watch him shamelessly flirt with preteen girls!

 

I've been told that it gets better in later chapters but I can't continue. Best of luck to the future.

lolbroman25
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Why This Is Better Than Other Chinese Stuff

Reviewed at: Final Trial (1)

Buckle up, it's a doozy.
1. Awespec doesn't contradict himself (at least, in obvious ways.) He doesn't use the phrase "an inescaple" this or "an overwhelming" that, or, worse, "...that can destroy anything" with the MC doing the EXACT THING that should be impossible due to the fact it was JUST mentioned. If he does contradict himself, all you gotta do is mention it, and he'll probably fix it (or, it wasn't a contradiction, but the MC's lack of knowledge that had him think something that later proved untrue).
2. Sex scenes. Pretty obvious one.
3. The MC is actually growing as a character, and doesn't stay the same throughout the story. He started as some arrogant guy that doesn't care about much, and put his parents' beliefs first. Later in the story, he realizes how much he contradicts himself when it comes to his loved ones (also, he CARES about things now) and makes an effort to try to let his loved ones fight with him during his battles, as he does with theirs.
4. Amazing world building. He explains where things are in relations to others, explains clearly how and why the bad guys are attacking (if it isn't due to arrogance or a surprise for later). He makes the battle feel like they happened for a reason, and makes clear the reasons why people are weaker compared to the MC in arrays, alchemy, and everything else (gonna have to read for an explanation of what arrayed are. I'm too lazy.)
5. Awespec EXPLAINS how things happen. He doesn't go, "oh, constitutions are just a thing. They're just there. (Explanation happens later in the story)." "Yeah, this guy's just AMAZING with plants." "People can't make better stuff than MC cause MC I'd MC." He doesn't do that. You'll get an explanation almost everything, you just gotta wait (although it could be a few hundred chapters).
6. The uniqueness. I've never heard of arrays like these before, or beasts being the representation of the universe's laws (even though there's like a thousand plus, he still sayd "the universe", probably the only gripe I have). I've never seen 3 separate categories of cultivation (body, soul, energy), along with several types for different energies. Dao hearts eventually get a very important use, besides showing the strength of beliefs or something like other Xianxia/Wuxia.
7. The grammar. It's extremely hard for me to find a good Wuxia/Xianxia with grammar that doesn't feel like Google Translate. It had mistakes at the beginning, but eventually it slows to about 1 every other chapter. This is with him probably not even having an editor, plus juggling 2 other novels, plus the job he probably has. (I don't know about first and last ones, I haven't asked).
8. All the other stuff I can't think of off the top of my head, and will feel bad about not including once I remember in like an hour/week.
This is the most readable Xianxia/Wuxia (don't know the difference, or which this is) I have found so far. Read it to at least the third volume (the second is where it kicks off, gets better grammar, and all-around improves). It's worth your time.

xcares
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MC is so OP to set a new standard for the xianxia genre.
MC is so stuuuuuuupid to set a new standard for the xianxia genre
MC is so random and incoherent to set a new standard for the xianxia genre
This is a masterpiece parody of xianxia. I just don't think it was intended for it to be one. XD

Thanatos010
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So good I’d literally sacrifice a baby to read more

Reviewed at: Second Trial (146)

This might just be me, since I like books to the point of mild addiction, but this book is very very good. I mean, I wouldn't sacrifice my own baby for more content, but I would sacrifice someone else's. The characters get surprisingly deep, even 'relatively' temporary ones. The story is so full of twists and turns that you might need a map to keep up with all the shit that goes on, the grammar is nigh perfect, but for spelling errors once every fifty chapters or so at the end. Been a while since I read the start so I don't remember what it is like. The style may turn some people off but I enjoyed it immensely. Love the book, keep doing what you're doing.

dosithee
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 great foundations ruined by over focus on female side characters.  Is like if consuming earths, devouring skies was erotica. Ultimately more of a drama/romance/self insert/erotica, than an action flick.

Disappointing because:

Writing Technique is quite good.  World building and plots are intricate and well thought out. Characters themselves also well thought out.

  however, Most of each chapter is about Mc seducing teenagers,  how hot and sexy specific teenagers are,  how these girls are getting stronger or what they think etc.  There are no training scenes as far as I've read (abt 100ch) and I think there have been like 6 battles with most not having Mc go all out.  

 

I personally love genius Mcs.  Part of why I love them is because I like seeing them figure out new techniques and get stronger and fight. Unfortunately that is rarely the focus of the story, as I said, is mostly about Mc flirting w girls. Quite disappointing.  Author has great skills and brilliant scheming mind, hsi personal tastes just differ to radically from mine.

Domini
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Character progression has some issues

I think the best phrase that embodies how I feel about this story is "the devil is in the details".

Unfortunantly, many details are left out of the earlier part of the story and are referenced, but not explained in enough detail to give the reader any type of real understanding of how events unfolded to bring the MC to where he is at the start of the story. Some of the apparent side characters are more fleshed out than the MC.

I would say the story in and of itself is entertaining and worth a read. I enjoy the main plot line and the style is not terrible. I ran across many grammer errors that could use correcting though. These problably stem from a lack of editorial review or availability of a proof reader.

My lowest score rated was for character. Because throughout the entire primary part of the story the MC's reflections of the past are simply not used effectively enough to expand on who the MC is as a person. This is corrected in later chapters somewhat decently, however for me the story progression at that point had completely overshadowed the MC.

Will I keep reading? Yes

Do I think the writting has improved over time? Yes.

Wille1412
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Try it, what's the worst that can happen?

I'm no pro reviewer, maybe there are obvious flaws, but fuck it. I'm enjoying this novel, I don't know what drags me to this one, I just genuenly like this novel a lot.

I'd say give it a try, you will probably be quick to find out if you enjoy this novel or not.

mukkaar
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Sorry, I just can't. (Edit: Maybe I can)

 

Mc is too op, genius, arrogant, flirt, show off, knowlegeable etc. etc. Too much everything. When you combine all that it just makes unbeliveable, literally and cringe as fuck. Even xianxia won't go this far, and if they dp they at least have excuse of character being some reincarnation of ultimate expert or whatnot.

In this case he's just some 13 year old. So far even many of his actions are just totally stupid and counterproductive, so hes even too stupid on top of all the other "too's".

Mc's character is contradictory, seems to have strong plot armor and just doesnt make any sense.

This coming from someone who highly enjoys xianxia genre with it's many times arrogant characters.

 

Edit:

After reading trough early chapters it gets better and pretty good. I'm going to leave my early review there though because my opinion is still same on those chapters. It' kind of like batism by fire, after you can get trough those early chapters it get better. It's insteresting novel and I enjoy reading it, but character is established quite badly. You forget and get over it after while though.