Reaper of the Martial World

by Awespec

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Mystery Romance Harem Male Lead Martial Arts Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural Wuxia
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"You're too arrogant."

To Dyon, it seemed as though these words were heard all the time.

However, how could these people possibly know of all his hard work? Of the fact that sleep was but a distant relative of his. How could they know that he never had a single moment to rest.

And yet, despite their ignorance, they still said, "you're too arrogant..."

But where were those people when a five-year-old Dyon's eyes shone looking at a computer screen filled with code? Where were those people when an eight-year-old Dyon played his piano and plucked his guitar strings until his fingers bled... needing to vent his feelings about his lost mother without bothering his fatigued father? Where were those people when Dyon sat alone at ten-years-old… when his parents were gone, and the only thing left was a room filled with inventions and computers?

Dyon's arrogance wasn't borne of thin air. It was his hard work. It was his shield. And he wasn't willing to give it up...

Now alone, he left his home behind.

He was no longer the boy genius who changed the human mortal realm. He was now nothing but a commoner, a bug noble families saw fit to step on. An insignificant existence.

And yet, Dyon was still the same unchanging person. Standing tall, his eyes firm and his will indomitable.

This so-called Martial World would come to understand the meaning behind his existence...

 

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"You're quite bold for a girl who's almost been recluse for her whole life you know," Dyon said chuckling.

"Little sister Delia and Meiying probably think so too, but you've been in my heart since the opening ceremony. Maybe not exactly in this way… But sometimes a foot in the door for a long time leads to a fully open one, no?"

Dyon smiled, 'it seems like she's been watching from afar for a long time… it must be lonely being in that room with Libro all the time.'

Dyon felt a delicate hand playing with his collar, "the truth is that I'm always playing the gentle big sister role, mostly because I have no idea how much longer I'll have the chance to…"

The vulnerability in her voice made Dyon tremble. Madeleine was so strong, yet it seemed even martial artists had their weaknesses too.

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RMW happens to be the very first novel I've ever written. I have to admit that the first volume requires a lot of work. However, from the second volume onward I am confident in saying that it becomes a ride just as enjoyable as some of the best wuxia novels available. If you happen to read that far, and disagree, feel free to join our discord and call me an idiot for wasting your time, LMAO. I hope you guys stick it out to the end <3


3-4 chapters a day, everyday.

***this story has NO NTR. Nor will it ever have NTR... ***
***I've begun posting pictures of what some characters of Focus look like on my twitter. So, check out @Awespec if you're interested***

 

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***this story of mine has also been uploaded to webnovel as well (in the description of webnovel (at the end), there is proof of this).

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The Naked Boy ago
Delia ago
Fooled? ago
The Library ago
The Opening Ceremony ago
Domineering ago
Splash ago
Heads Meet ago
FUCK ago
What an Idiot ago
Ava ago
What it Means to be a Genius ago
Heaven's Chimes ago
Savior ago
Madeleine ago
Goddess' Disposition ago
Bet ago
The Banquet ago
Femme Fatale ago
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The Celestial Woman ago
Rallying ago
Central Pillar Opening ago
A Brewing Storm ago
Rage ago
The Wedding ago
Celestial Deer Sect Successor ago
Behind the Scenes (1) ago
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Intelligent MC to it's finest.

Man, where to start? To begin, yes, the MC has a lot of 'natural' talent as far as his innate soul and it's influence on his strength, but even with this being the case I believe it is inherited amd not just a random spoof, though I'll avoid saying why to not spoil too much. Yes, he is also very intelligent, but I believe that means little considering the work and focus he puts into everything he does, even if he outwardly seems rather lackidasical. It's obvious that Dyon has gotten where he is (even before his journey to the martial world) due to his own personal strife and ambition. Graaanted, a 13 year old being one of the most renowned/sucessful inventors of the world is a bit of a stretch, but Mozart was recognized as a genius before he reached the age of seven even without the aid of a martial world's influence on society.

I've spam-read this work over the last week or so, and I have to say that I'm thouroughly and near-wholly impressed with how fleshed out and intricate the plans Dyon sets into motion are. As a psychology major, even in the first year of mt college studies, I find his ability to see through and link together vauge concepts and clues to form a coherent conclusion wonderful. And yes, this is obviously due to the author providing him 'plot armor', but this story manages to pull it off in a way that explains many of the deeper thinkings behind his thought process that (in my opinion) are not only hinted at through the story for the reader to discover, and even the cases that new information is presented during the dialouge of his 'big reveal' seem to be used to provide extra context for the story as a whole while not pointlessly and constantly info-dumping in order to cary the flow of the story, as opposed to simply adding a little more skin-deeo credibility to the MC.

 

Character development is, how do I put this...it is extremely difficult to portray a character with both martial realm values and ideals, yet also not instantly diving into the power-hungry or extremely shallow-filler archetype. Granted, many of the short-term enemies usually are the "This person is a nobody, look at my standing, how dare they wish to compare to me!" type, but as Sun Tzu said(paraphrasing since I don't know the exact quote); Know your enemy, know yourself, and you need not fear the result of a thousand battles. In a martial realm, I think this is even more true. Short-sighted people are short lived afterall. 

However! Then you get to the main characters. Ava and Madeleine for example, both see and react to the world and crisis around them with different goals and ideals that have been touched upon and grown throughout the story. Not only that, it's rather painstakingly obvious that while both women hold Dyon in very high regard, both live their own lives without being desperately dependant on him. The auther even says that Madeleine is likely even stronger than the MC in sheer strength and ability, however it's her personal relationship and experiences with Dyon, more specifically how they each care for and consult each other on the issues and problems they face that give Madeleine the depth of character missing from so many novels now.

 

The only real critics that I have are minor typos, somewhat vague explanations that can lead a reader becoming confused due to simple lack of in-depth reading as opposed to a light skim of the words without deeper thought. Oh, and kids (under the age of 18, though I realize cultures such as these are often a bit less conservative on these topics, and these things happen anyway) doing a bit of frickle-frackery. Even then, I don't really mind, but at least an off-handed mention of the age instead of the worthiness in regards to Dyon's flirting and casual (joookes) playboy level seduction skills would be nice. 

 

Soooo yeah, that's about it. I don't really want to touch on anything else since I'd have to hardcore try not to ruin the plot if I did, but I absolutely suggest this for a read. Whether it's the cultivation aspect, character interaction and growth, detailed plots and foreshadowing, this is a wonderfully read psychologically, recreationally, and linguistically. Keep up the amazing work my dude, you've earned yourself a fan in every respect of the word. Except money, I'm poor and cheap, but other than that, you have my full support.

 

moira
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This story isn't for everyone. If you don't like it from the start, meaning first ten or so chapters, you probably won't like the story at all. Because, you know, it's this kind of story for people who want this kind of story. Ridiculously OP character who is behaving this particular way. Who can steamroll his enemies without much problem. Have hell of a (improbable) good luck and probably will have. The kind of story which you go into so you can have fun, watch crazy scenes and cheer for MC with nearly total assurance of him getting through the shit and smell after flowers afterward.

So, please. If you don't like the story, go away. It's not the right story for you. And being brat about it is hurting the author. You know, the person who is working hard for it and probably love it and just want to make other people having some good time. It's hard, making something nice. Try write some good shit, sorry for my French, and maybe after that you can tear into another person.

With this off from my chest, I am overall happy with the story.

I like the way the author create the atmosphere in it. You can pretty easily paint the image in your head if you are the kind of person. Some of Awespec's scenes are just so alive, work with the story in a way which really grabs your attention and makes great visuals. I like author's crazy imagination. It's hard to write in a way that doesn't bore quickly and Awespec is making good job so far.

There are few aspects that are irritating me - the thing with beaty, sometimes too easy way the MC has it, the stupidity of some characters (if not all of them in moments). But all in all, it's solid story.

4* in reality, but I'll give it full. You probably know why.

Wille1412
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Try it, what's the worst that can happen?

I'm no pro reviewer, maybe there are obvious flaws, but fuck it. I'm enjoying this novel, I don't know what drags me to this one, I just genuenly like this novel a lot.

I'd say give it a try, you will probably be quick to find out if you enjoy this novel or not.

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last half star for when the stories finished

Love the story

just a great xianxia, but with a great personal spin by the author

his implementing of his own ideas (great ideas btw) on the normal xianxia take are really hooking me here

i love the fan service with his twitter and patreon (see author note chapter: Elvin Tomes (3) (227))

i‘m not a fan of harems but the one hes got going till now is nice

the two wifes feel important to the mc and the plot

emotions are fleshed out and the story has depth

i like this novel and the author so much rn that i joined the 10$ (the benefits also played a part xd)

thx mr author

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Fun read but not ground breaking

It's not the most intuitive story but it is a fun read that gets much better and more complex as you go on.

Though my biggest gripe with the story is the age of the main characters, they all read like they are 20+ not 13-17 year olds (especially when it comes to explicit scenes).

Calavente
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make the effort to read at least 20 chapters...

That's all there is to say.

it then became one of my favorited novels here.

but I agree that the 20 (or 50?) early chapters seems a bit cringy or wish-fullfillement... until it makes sense, and that you understand more the lore, the world, and why he behaves like that.

 

take my cue on that: 

the early behavior of the MC is because he comes from the mortal world, and did there so many impossible things that he reacts as any 13yo reacts when having encountered heavy success... 

and he can do that... why ? because spoiler... 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

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Quick review (haven’t read that far yet)

At first as I was beginning to read this book it gave an interesting feel to it. Naked Mc and slightly OP and tall AF at 1.8 as a 13 yr old. He is different compared to other mcs as he has the balls to flirt compared to other mcs.

Albeit their was some details left out that left many readers confused. And some other concepts that could help improve such as the so called “will”. And the world building could include more things about where they are. 

For those wonder about the so called “NTR” that was mentioned by the author here is a little spoiler as it might mention some things about the chapter.

Spoiler: Spoiler

For those that are curious go to chapter “A brewing Storm” and scroll half way down to find the authors note in the chapter and he explains what happens. 

All in all the start of the novel is somewhat new compared to other novels and provides new areas on the dao or what is called “will” in the novel.

 

finaltheorem47
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Quantity over quality, but i like it

I've read and dropped a lot of chiense novels because of how slow the pacing gets when each scene, even the mundane ones, become several chapters long. This one has an extremely high release rate, chapter lengths are shorter, and overall not the best quality. I do love how in waiting a few days though there is already a 20-30 chapter backlog for me to catch up on.

 

The story overall is entertaining though MC is very arrogant which takes some time to become numb to. There is a lot of plot armor and MC rarely seems to face difficulties, but there are so many villians out there and the MC goes after them all so it's very entertaining. 

 

Might biggest peeve, author if you're reading this, is I don't like how MC's wives and similar become a mouthpiece for Dylan as soon as he walks out of the room. The few times they're alone and given the spotlight, it's still always about MC with what they say/do/think.

RealistFreak
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One of the better Wuxia/Xianxia novels out there.

First thing to note about this, and conversely with most novels of this genre, you can't really judge the entire thing on the basis of just a couple of chapters. Most novels of this genre don't explain much of the things surrounding the MC, backstory or main story points, until they become more relevant or when it makes more sense, flow-wise. This story doesn't escape that, so if you are looking for something that gives you more of the background plot straight from the get-go, this probably isn't for you.

That being said, if you do want to go for a wild ride, and are prepared to read a good half of what has been released so far(497 and counting from the posting of this review), then this novel will give you a good time.

The main character, Dyon, is a bit on the OP side. Something that seems a bit more on the wish-fufillment side of things early on. As the story progresses, Dyon start to get more balanced in nature, even as he stays OP. A bit of a paradox, I know, but that is the feeling that gets portrayed for me.

The cultivation system used has some standard stuff, with several levels that are exponentially more powerful than the stage before, but also has some unique elements that are refreshing in general. Wills and Intents are variations on the laws of the world that many wuxia novels have that, for me, spice things up a bit. The energy, body, and soul cultivation all existing and being dependent on each other is also a breath of fresh air.

The antagonists introduced vary with different ambitions, most of which being a bit trope-y in general, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. Not every villian needs to be perfectly original in backstory and plot. And some of them, a certain frienemy met in an important tower comes to mind, are very human in nature.

The story in general is slower in pace, but has been building up in a larger super-arc that has encompassed the many mini-arcs that have occurred throughout the story. There is a bit of Dues Ex Machina at times, but it is at least more believable in nature, with actual reasoning behind what happens.

In the end, the story is very enjoyable, to the point where I look forward to every release. I wholly recommend giving this story a read.

For those interested in release rate, the author releases chapters in split blocks, the chapter naming coming from the various happenings in the chapter. There is usually around one full block, which averages at around 3 parts, per day, which is very impressive and gives a good amount to read.

Yoyo53552
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I’m always awaiting the next chapter like a hawk. Constantly refreshing my page waiting for the next few chapters. Fantastic story, I’m instantly captivated. Some parts of the story seem to drag on for ages but those are very rare. So far love it