The Predator

by Nneeil

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance Anti-Hero Lead GameLit Grimdark Harem High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Slice of Life Strong Lead Supernatural
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Stephen, a power-hungry forsaken man, awakens in a place he knows nothing of, alongside a bunch of strangers.
His stay in this phantasmagorical world will lead to disturbing discoveries, and as he keeps on surviving, the line between right and wrong becomes more and more blurred. In a world where power is the bedrock of society, what if he shed a bit of blood for his goals? Thrilling adventures, outlandish races, endless power at his fingertips, nothing will ever be the same again to him. Aiming to become unrivaled, he'll do anything necessary to become the ultimate existence.

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Sw'S AMV
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Looks good, 

I'll come back for this Novel when it has at least 60chap

Tranquilmoth
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Reminds me alot of Tokyo ghoul, but they aren't eating people and the characters and plot are less interesting and believable. I can't really tell if it's bad or just not my cup of tea, so I'm just gonna give a 3 star rating. I've seen alot of the "im suddenly in a different world" type of story and this one just isn't up to par with most of them. Overall: decent story, good grammar, bad plot devices. Hope this helps😀

darrasdave
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A cliche but not terrible

Very cliche story so far. The grammar is not bad from what i have read so far. The story seems to be a cut and paste found in another world litrpg. The main reason I dislike the story however is the way the characters act and are portrayed. From the beginning the mc is called handsome and every other sentence is him *cleverly* or *amazingly* doing something obvious.

The fact that they are all found in a mysterious place was just too glossed over and the reactions too calm.

Overall i felt like i was being spoonfed the plot and told how to feel about each character rather than being able to just enjoy or interpret the story on my own.

ObscureReference
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I will revise this review as soon as I obtain more chapters to analyze. However, this is my review on the potential shown by the story so far. 

 

EDIT: THis story is progressing smoothly and seems to deliver on the aforementioned potential.

 

Maxime
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The first thirteen chapters were actually pretty amazing. Barely any flaws, if there even were any, and all the characters have actual personalities that had been introduced in a very relaxed and detailed manner.

The premise and overall direction of the story seems to be turning out very interesting as well; RPG elements, a very handsome and slightly Evil MC and both fast-paced physical and mental developments are my wet pleasure in novels.

The only thing that is turning me off is the average number of chapter updates, but let's just hope the author will satisfy me.

 

Overall, great story!

 

Dargon
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Really enjoying the series so far. Keep it up!

Super-Sonic
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Crazy Mcs check

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