God of Sacrifice

by Evil

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Dungeon High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Mythos Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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An Oath held until final breath, A doorway that brings only death.

Levi, a Royal Knight, is commanded to be a sacrifice so that the King may flee the Palace alive and dies shortly afterwards. But in doing so, he becomes something... More.

 

Cover from https://www.angelarium.net/af-angel-of-anger/ 

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cucuface50
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Very Interesting Concept

I originally clicked on this novel expecting an angsty novel like that one LN were the dude gets left in a dungeon. But instead this novel's title is literal and the whole concept has made me excited to see how the novel turns out. I think it might still be good even if it turns into a powertrip if done right. I recommend reading this novel just mainly for the interesting concept. The grammer is fine. It read smoothly for a RR novel and the dialogue doesn't make everyone sound retarded. Also the main character is slightly unique as you don't see too many do-your-duty types and I like how you made him a god of sacrifice that was not angsty and annoying. I really hope you use the God part to your advantage and have your character act more like a god instead of an OP MC that wanders around pretending to be human and then shocks everyone with his powers if insta-killing and pure autis . . . manliness. So good job, ignore he haters, please continue the story, and enjoy writing your novel.

nyye
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Amazing so far (Up to chapter 9)

The mix of real feeling characters and an interesting world makes this very engrossing and i have not seen any grammar issues.

Mu'er
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As far as I can see this has very little in the way of the generic character idolatry commonly seen in fictions with similar titles. I enjoyed the first two chapters and this spurred me to write a review rather than simply bookmark the tab.

ABSOLUTELY HAREM
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Totally not relevant or anything but if you find a little girl getting killed by an ancient god after finding out her brother was killed after being abandoned by his party, then THIS is the comedy for you, my friend. 

Few times were someone else is talking but it sounds like the MC. Pretty readable outside of that issue. 

Gorgor
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I am not good to review but i can say i enjoy this story so far (chap 12) . Well built etc.. 

You say you start this story for fun and i think you make a better story than planned 

Keep the good work , i support you 

( sorry for my poor english not native etc.. )

Just4jest
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The story is...basic. it takes the reincarcnation concept and tweaks it a bit but the change doesn't feel innovative. The dialogue feels emotionless. I can see attempts to convey emotion but it never causes me to feel like the emotion is actually there. The conflict points also feel basic and a bit almost contrived. The main villain comes out of nowhere so quickly and is gone just as sfat that there is no opportunity to come to an understanding of the villain and as a result there is no real connection for me that makes me take him seriously as a villain or even cause mee to care whether the mc does anything about him.

 

hsteinvall
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Good and different but...

This story is good and different, but sadly the author decided to different pow:s while maintaining first person. I think that's super-whacko and basically unreadable. I usually just skip such chapters but that isn't a perfect solution. I'm removing the bookmark. Author: give a shout out if you change how you do your pow:s. Or don't, but your story is good, I like it, I just can't stand that one thing.

Goldenfield
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Well written and praise the sun

a solid tasty read with a protagonist who is likeable.

 

Deus Vault.

The_Gentelman
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As always I will keep this brief. It is a good story. Very little chapters as of the one I am writing this but the potential for so much more is there.  Characters are good, plot is good, grammar is good. Give it a try. I look foreword to future chapters.

DaruneAlbane
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I am enjoying the story do not understand grammer nazies but trolls gotta troll